Oct. 26, 2024
As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for traning with other persons with dissabilities.
In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child.
We did a serie of exercises, at the beggining was some hard to do every action but as the minutes passed We improved each instruction the teacher gave us.
It was a funny time however in some ocations Sebastian became angry. Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the order.
It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a great habit for our lives.
Thanks for reading. (I feel happy)
As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for training with other persons with dissabilities.
In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper ofgood and proud, because I assistent ford my child.
We did a serie of exercises, at the begginning was som, some were hard to do every action but as the minutesime passed W, we improved with each instruction the teacher gave us.
It was a funny time however iwhen on some ocatcasions Sebastian became angry.
Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the orderinstructions.
It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a great habit for the rest of our lives.
As I have a child with Autism, t. Today was the first day ofor training with other personsople with dissabilities.
The original phrasing implies a direct causal relationship: you’re required to train with other people due to your child having autism.
In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child.
I’m not clear what this means. Potentially, “I felt very happy because I had the role of assistant for my child.” Starting with “in reality” requires an initial statement of what you expected. Example: “Initially I thought the day would be stressful, but in reality it was fun.”
We did a series of exercises, a. At the begginning was some hard to do every action b, every action was hard to do. But as the minutes passed W, we improved with each instruction the teacher gave us.
It was a funny time; however i, on some ocatcasions Sebastian became angry.
Funny = humorous while fun = enjoyable
Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the order.assignment.
“Completed the order” is a bit unnatural. Saying “assignment” or “task” is more natural.
It was a great experience for us, and. I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a grea a habit thabit will be great for our lives.
My first day training with Sebas |
As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for traning with other persons with dissabilities.
The original phrasing implies a direct causal relationship: you’re required to train with other people due to your child having autism. As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for training with other persons with dis |
In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child. In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child. I’m not clear what this means. Potentially, “I felt very happy because I had the role of assistant for my child.” Starting with “in reality” requires an initial statement of what you expected. Example: “Initially I thought the day would be stressful, but in reality it was fun.” In reality, I felt very |
We did a serie of exercises, at the beggining was some hard to do every action but as the minutes passed We improved each instruction the teacher gave us. We did a series of exercises We did a serie of exercises, at the beg |
It was a funny time however in some ocations Sebastian became angry. It was a fun Funny = humorous while fun = enjoyable It was a funny time however |
Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the order. Despite “Completed the order” is a bit unnatural. Saying “assignment” or “task” is more natural. Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the |
It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a great habit for our lives. It was a great experience for us It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will become |
Thanks for reading. |
(I feel happy) |
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