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galoarellano1987

July 16, 2024

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My first day of work after the pandemia

When my partners and I return phisically to the office, I felt a little bit of ansioux and nerves because i was to used to stay in home with my family. Working from home was a greateful experiencie, because I was able to share with my family, especially with my child.

Then, when i went out from home to station bus, i felt nervous for acquire the virus and the environmente was strange, people demonstrated a lot fear. This experience of first day was not than peaceful, however i think was a important day on my life.

When I got home, i felt a lot of desire to huge my childs. It was the unique thing I matter, no more.

Go to the work over and over again, it allowed me to recover my trust and it allowed me to understand that COVID has gone.

Currently, the situation is different, afraid to get sick no exists already, however the crime rate rises in my city and the people be afraid go out to street now, cause of the crime.

Greets.

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My first day of work after the pandemiac

When my partners and I returned phiysically to the office, I felt a little bit of ansxiouxsness and nerves because iI was tovery used toin stay ing home with my family.

Working from home was a greateful experiencie, be. Because I was able to sharpend time with my family, especially with my child.

Then, when iI went out from home to the station bus, iI felt nervous forbecause of the fear from acquireing the virus and the environmente was strange, p. People demonstrated a lot fear.

You need to capitalize "I" because it's a personal noun

Thise first day experience of first day was not than peaceful, however iI think it was a important day oin my life.

When I got home, iI felt a lot of desire to huge my childsren.

The plural form of child is not childs, but it's "children"

It was the one unique thing Ithat mattered, no more.

Going to the work over and over again, it allowed me to recovergain my trust and it allowed me to understand that COVID hais gone.

Currently, the situation is different, I'm not afraid to get sick no exists already, hanymore. However, the crime rate rioses in my city and the people bare afraid go out tof the street now, cause of the crimes.

Greets.

My first day of work after the pandemiac

When my partners and I returned phiysically to the office, I felt a little bit of ansiouxxiety and nerves because iI was to used to stay ing at home with my family.

Working from home was a greateful experiencie, because I was able to sharpend time with my family, especially with my child.

The word greatful is an adjective; however, it would be more so used to describe a person.

Then, when i went out from home toI left home for the station bus, iI felt nervous forto acquire the virus and t. The environmente was strange,; people demonstrated a lot of fear.

In the instance of "for acquire" for would be for verbs which end in -ing, such as for aquiring or for shopping, in this case, the infinitive phrase of "to aquire" is more appropriate.

This experience of the/my first day was not thant peaceful,; however i, I think it was an important day oin my life.

When I got back home, iI felt a lot of desire to huge my childsren/child.

It was thea unique thing Iime, but it matter,s no more.

GTo tgo theo work over and over again, it allowed me to recover my trust and it allowed me to understand that COVID has gone.

Currently, the situation is different,. People are not afraid to get sick no exists already,anymore; however, the crime rate rises in my city and the people bare afraid to go out to the street now, because of the crime.

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My first day of work after the pandemia


My first day of work after the pandemiac

My first day of work after the pandemiac

When my partners and I return phisically to the office, I felt a little bit of ansioux and nerves because i was to used to stay in home with my family.


When my partners and I returned phiysically to the office, I felt a little bit of ansiouxxiety and nerves because iI was to used to stay ing at home with my family.

When my partners and I returned phiysically to the office, I felt a little bit of ansxiouxsness and nerves because iI was tovery used toin stay ing home with my family.

Working from home was a greateful experiencie, because I was able to share with my family, especially with my child.


Working from home was a greateful experiencie, because I was able to sharpend time with my family, especially with my child.

The word greatful is an adjective; however, it would be more so used to describe a person.

Working from home was a greateful experiencie, be. Because I was able to sharpend time with my family, especially with my child.

Then, when i went out from home to station bus, i felt nervous for acquire the virus and the environmente was strange, people demonstrated a lot fear.


Then, when i went out from home toI left home for the station bus, iI felt nervous forto acquire the virus and t. The environmente was strange,; people demonstrated a lot of fear.

In the instance of "for acquire" for would be for verbs which end in -ing, such as for aquiring or for shopping, in this case, the infinitive phrase of "to aquire" is more appropriate.

Then, when iI went out from home to the station bus, iI felt nervous forbecause of the fear from acquireing the virus and the environmente was strange, p. People demonstrated a lot fear.

You need to capitalize "I" because it's a personal noun

This experience of first day was not than peaceful, however i think was a important day on my life.


This experience of the/my first day was not thant peaceful,; however i, I think it was an important day oin my life.

Thise first day experience of first day was not than peaceful, however iI think it was a important day oin my life.

When I got home, i felt a lot of desire to huge my childs.


When I got back home, iI felt a lot of desire to huge my childsren/child.

When I got home, iI felt a lot of desire to huge my childsren.

The plural form of child is not childs, but it's "children"

It was the unique thing I matter, no more.


It was thea unique thing Iime, but it matter,s no more.

It was the one unique thing Ithat mattered, no more.

Greets.


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Go to the work over and over again, it allowed me to recover my trust and it allowed me to understand that COVID has gone.


GTo tgo theo work over and over again, it allowed me to recover my trust and it allowed me to understand that COVID has gone.

Going to the work over and over again, it allowed me to recovergain my trust and it allowed me to understand that COVID hais gone.

Currently, the situation is different, afraid to get sick no exists already, however the crime rate rises in my city and the people be afraid go out to street now, cause of the crime.


Currently, the situation is different,. People are not afraid to get sick no exists already,anymore; however, the crime rate rises in my city and the people bare afraid to go out to the street now, because of the crime.

Currently, the situation is different, I'm not afraid to get sick no exists already, hanymore. However, the crime rate rioses in my city and the people bare afraid go out tof the street now, cause of the crimes.

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