Aug. 12, 2025
My First Day Of 12th Grade
Yesterday, I had to wake up 6am again, because summer vacation is over. After six weeks of waking up after 10am, I wasn't used to that at all. For the first day at school, everyone had 6 school hours with their class teachers. For me, this meant 6 hours of maths, without remembering anything we did before the summer break. As expected, I really messed a lot up an these six hours were pretty frustrating. On top of that, my teacher announced a test for Friday. The day continued with 2 hours of teaching an instrument to 5th graders and a smal gig with my schoolband. At 5 pm I was home, and instantly had to study for several different schoolsubjects.
After this first day, (and now already the second one) I really know: these following eight month's will be extremely hard. From now on I won't be able to do everthing I like, but I will try to keep up the writing on here.
My First Day Of 12th Grade
12th grade is very formal. If you want to be less formal you would write grade 12
Yesterday, I had to wake up 6am again, because summer vacation is over.
- Again makes it sounds like you woke up at 6am the day before yesterday and yesterday you had to do it again
For the first day at school, everyone had 6 school hours with their class teachers.
- class teachers isn't something we say in English, we just say teachers
- school hours also isn't something we say, if you want to be explicit that it wasn't just 6 hours at school which includes lunch but it was six hours in class then you could write 'everyone had 6 hours of class with their teachers'
As expected, I really messed a lot up and these six hours were pretty frustrating.
The day continued with 2 hours of teaching an instrument to 5th graders and a small gig with my school band.
At 5 pm I was home, and instantly had to study for several different school subjects.
After thise first day, (and now already the second one) I alrealldy know: that these following eight month's will be extremely hard.
- No need for a colon here
From now on I won't be able to do everthing I like, but I will try to keep up the writing on here.
Feedback
English is pretty good overall here, good job :)
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My First Day Of 12th Grade My First Day Of 12th Grade 12th grade is very formal. If you want to be less formal you would write grade 12 |
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Yesterday, I had to wake up 6am again, because summer vacation is over. Yesterday, I had to wake up 6am - Again makes it sounds like you woke up at 6am the day before yesterday and yesterday you had to do it again |
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After six weeks of waking up after 10am, I wasn't used to that at all. |
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For the first day at school, everyone had 6 school hours with their class teachers. For the first day at school, everyone had 6 - class teachers isn't something we say in English, we just say teachers - school hours also isn't something we say, if you want to be explicit that it wasn't just 6 hours at school which includes lunch but it was six hours in class then you could write 'everyone had 6 hours of class with their teachers' |
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For me, this meant 6 hours of maths, without remembering anything we did before the summer break. |
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As expected, I really messed a lot up an these six hours were pretty frustrating. As expected, I really messed a lot up and these six hours were pretty frustrating. |
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On top of that, my teacher announced a test for Friday. |
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The day continued with 2 hours of teaching an instrument to 5th graders and a smal gig with my schoolband. The day continued with 2 hours of teaching an instrument to 5th graders and a small gig with my school band. |
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At 5 pm I was home, and instantly had to study for several different schoolsubjects. At 5 pm I was home, and instantly had to study for several different school subjects. |
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After this first day, (and now already the second one) I really know: these following eight month's will be extremely hard. After th - No need for a colon here |
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From now on I won't be able to do everthing I like, but I will try to keep up the writing on here. From now on I won't be able to do everthing I like, but I will try to keep up the writing on here. |
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