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My first day here in Langcorrect

Hi everyone!

Today is my first day here, I don't know how it works, but I think that I'll understand soon. Currently, I'm working as a software developer and leading few developers. I have been managing several teams in my career and now I'm focusing in grow up like a software architect. It's a very difficult path and the roadmap won't be easy, but really it gives me so illusion to accomplish it.

If anyone could give me hints or advice to get the most experience here I would appreciate it.

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My first day here in Langcorrect

Hi everyone!

Today is my first day here, so I don't really know how it works, but I think that I'll understand soon.

Currently, I'm working as a software developer and I’m also leading a few developers.

I have been managing several teams in my career and now I'm focusing ion grow up likebecoming a software architect.

By ‘grow up like a software architect’ do you mean you’re trying to build your brand or something like that?

It's a very difficult path and the roadmapadvancing won't be easy, but I’m really it gives me so illusionmotivated to accomplish itmy goals.

I don’t know what you meant by ‘so illusion to accomplish it,’ so hopefully my correction is in line with what you were intending

If anyone could give me hints or advice to get the most experience here I would appreciate it.

Hint sounds kind of unnatural in this context to me

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I guess my advice would be to try to use grammatical concepts that are new to you to see if you’re using them correctly.

Good job with the English and best of luck to you in your career!

My first day here in Langcorrect


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Hi everyone!


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Today is my first day here, I don't know how it works, but I think that I'll understand soon.


Today is my first day here, so I don't really know how it works, but I think that I'll understand soon.

Currently, I'm working as a software developer and leading few developers.


Currently, I'm working as a software developer and I’m also leading a few developers.

I have been managing several teams in my career and now I'm focusing in grow up like a software architect.


I have been managing several teams in my career and now I'm focusing ion grow up likebecoming a software architect.

By ‘grow up like a software architect’ do you mean you’re trying to build your brand or something like that?

It's a very difficult path and the roadmap won't be easy, but really it gives me so illusion to accomplish it.


It's a very difficult path and the roadmapadvancing won't be easy, but I’m really it gives me so illusionmotivated to accomplish itmy goals.

I don’t know what you meant by ‘so illusion to accomplish it,’ so hopefully my correction is in line with what you were intending

If anyone could give me hints or advice to get the most experience here I would appreciate it.


If anyone could give me hints or advice to get the most experience here I would appreciate it.

Hint sounds kind of unnatural in this context to me

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