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Liderkarga

July 23, 2025

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My first day at university

I was 18 years old. When the clock rang, I waked up. I was excited and happy. I hate wake up early.
I went to my school with my motocycle. I had a very fast motocycle.
How did I buy that motocycle when I was only 18 years? Those days, my mother promised me. I passed university exam and she bought a motocycle.
My motocycle name is Honda CBR 600RR. This was my dream.
There was breakfast restaurant opposite my school. I sat there and sent a message to my old school teacher.
The first day at university in Turkiye, teacher don’t teach. Students take care of paper works. I went to orientation meeting. Some students looked nervous and some student looked happy like me.
Day off, let be honest, which one of us married with first looked girl at university?

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When the clock rang, I waoked up.

I hate wakeing up early.

I went to my school withon my motorcycle.

I had a very fast motorcycle.

How did I buy that motorcycle when I was only 18 years old?

could also say "only 18?"

Those days, mMy mother promised me she would.

I passed a/the university exam and she bought a motorcycle.

say "a" if it was a regular exam for a class or something
say "the" if it was a specific exam that would be called "the university exam" - like the exam to get into the university

My motorcycle's name is Honda CBR 600RR.

There was a breakfast restaurant opposite my school.

The first day at university in Turkiye, the teachers don’t teach.

Students take care of paper works.

I went to orientation meeting.

Some students looked nervous and some students looked happy like me.

Day off, letLet's be honest, which one of us married withe first looked girlgirl they saw at university?

I'm not sure what you mean by "day off." It might be something not translatable directly from your language to English.

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Liderkarga

July 24, 2025

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Thank you !

My first day at university

I was 18 years old.

When the clock rang, I waoked up.

I was excited and happy.

I hate wakeing up early.

I went to my school withon my motorcycle.

I had a very fast motocycle.

How did I buy that motorcycle when I was only 18 years old?

Those daysBack then, my mother had promised me that she would buy me a motorcycle if I passed my university exam.

(Combined it with the below sentence.)

My motocycle name isis the Honda CBR 600RR.

This was my dream.

There was breakfast restaurant opposite my school.

I sat there and sent a message to my old school teacher.

TOne the first day at university in Turkiye, teachers don’t teach.

Students take care of paperadministrative works.

I went to an orientation meeting.

Some students looked nervous and some students looked happy like me.

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Liderkarga

July 24, 2025

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Thank you for your detailed explanations !

My first day at university


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I was 18 years old.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When the clock rang, I waked up.


When the clock rang, I waoked up.

When the clock rang, I waoked up.

I was excited and happy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hate wake up early.


I hate wakeing up early.

I hate wakeing up early.

I went to my school with my motocycle.


I went to my school withon my motorcycle.

I went to my school withon my motorcycle.

I had a very fast motocycle.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had a very fast motorcycle.

How did I buy that motocycle when I was only 18 years?


How did I buy that motorcycle when I was only 18 years old?

How did I buy that motorcycle when I was only 18 years old?

could also say "only 18?"

Those days, my mother promised me.


Those daysBack then, my mother had promised me that she would buy me a motorcycle if I passed my university exam.

(Combined it with the below sentence.)

Those days, mMy mother promised me she would.

I passed university exam and she bought a motocycle.


I passed a/the university exam and she bought a motorcycle.

say "a" if it was a regular exam for a class or something say "the" if it was a specific exam that would be called "the university exam" - like the exam to get into the university

My motocycle name is Honda CBR 600RR.


My motocycle name isis the Honda CBR 600RR.

My motorcycle's name is Honda CBR 600RR.

This was my dream.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was breakfast restaurant opposite my school.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was a breakfast restaurant opposite my school.

I sat there and sent a message to my old school teacher.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The first day at university in Turkiye, teacher don’t teach.


TOne the first day at university in Turkiye, teachers don’t teach.

The first day at university in Turkiye, the teachers don’t teach.

Students take care of paper works.


Students take care of paperadministrative works.

Students take care of paper works.

I went to orientation meeting.


I went to an orientation meeting.

I went to orientation meeting.

Some students looked nervous and some student looked happy like me.


Some students looked nervous and some students looked happy like me.

Some students looked nervous and some students looked happy like me.

Day off, let be honest, which one of us married with first looked girl at university?


Day off, letLet's be honest, which one of us married withe first looked girlgirl they saw at university?

I'm not sure what you mean by "day off." It might be something not translatable directly from your language to English.

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