July 22, 2025
My First Day
Hi, this day is first day to here. Can i do this, i don't know but i will try. today i came to office. i have three friends at the office. i had a breakfast. i ate two bisquits and i drink a cup of coffee but it was turkish coffee. because we drink turkish coffee at 10:30 a.m. every day at the office. i think, it is a nice drink. cafein is awake to people. i am wearing short today because it's very hot and sunny.
Selam, bugün buradaki ilk günüm. Yapabilecek miyim bilmiyorum ama deneyeceğim. Bugün ofise geldim. Ofiste üç tane arkadaşım var. Kahvaltı yaptım. İki tane bisküvi yedim ve bir fincan kahve içtim ama Türk kahvesiydi. Çünkü biz ofiste her gün saat 10:30'da Türk kahvesi içeriz. Bence güzel bir içecek. Kafein insanları uyandırır. Bugün şort giyiyorum çünkü hava çok sıcak ve güneşli.
Hi, this day is my first day to here.
Can iI do this, i? I don't know but iI will try.
Be sure to capitalize the first person subject, “I” never “i”
tToday iI came to the office.
Start every sentence with a capital letter. And the object (in this case “office”) requires an article (“the”).
iI have three friends at the office.
iI had a breakfast.
iI ate two bisqcuits and iI driank a cup of coffee but it was tTurkish coffee.
past tense of “drink” is “drank” — you did the action in the past. Also you need to capitalize proper nouns like Turkish.
bBecause we drink turkish coffee at 10:30 a.m. every day at the office. …???
Starting a sentence with “because” requires a separate clause.
Because we drink … every day at the office, we have lots of energy.
OR
We have lots of energy, because we drink …
The clause beginning with “because” cannot stand alone.
iI think, it is a nice drink.
caCaffeine is awake to peopl stimulant to people and keeps them awake.
iI am wearing shorts today because it's very hot and sunny.
Feedback
Good start!! Remember to always capitalize “i” when used alone to signify “I”.
My First Day
Hi, this day isis my first day to here.
Can iI do this, i? I don't know, but iI will try.
"I" is always capitalized
tToday iI came to the office.
iI have three friends at the office.
Better: "I'm friends with three of my colleagues at the office"
iI had a breakfast.
i ateI had two bisqcuits and i drink a cup of coffee but it was tTurkish coffee.
We tend to use "had" instead of "ate" and "drank"
because wWe drink tTurkish coffee at 10:30 a.m. every day at the office.
iI think, it is a nice drink.
caCaffein is awake toe wakes up people.
iI am wearing shorts today because it's very hot and sunny.
Feedback
Great job. Welcome!
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Hi, this day is first day to here. Hi, this Hi, this day is my first day |
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Can i do this, i don't know but i will try. Can "I" is always capitalized Can Be sure to capitalize the first person subject, “I” never “i” |
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today i came to office.
Start every sentence with a capital letter. And the object (in this case “office”) requires an article (“the”). |
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i have three friends at the office.
Better: "I'm friends with three of my colleagues at the office"
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i had a breakfast.
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i ate two bisquits and i drink a cup of coffee but it was turkish coffee.
We tend to use "had" instead of "ate" and "drank"
past tense of “drink” is “drank” — you did the action in the past. Also you need to capitalize proper nouns like Turkish. |
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because we drink turkish coffee at 10:30 a.m. every day at the office.
Starting a sentence with “because” requires a separate clause. Because we drink … every day at the office, we have lots of energy. OR We have lots of energy, because we drink … The clause beginning with “because” cannot stand alone. |
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i think, it is a nice drink.
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cafein is awake to people.
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i am wearing short today because it's very hot and sunny.
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