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My First Car

My first car was a Volkswagen Passat and I bought it in 2009.

That year, I earned a little money, which was about 120000 Chinese Yuan. My family on my wife’s side suggested my wife and I buy a car. Of course, I also wanted to buy a car, which used to be my dream.

The first car model that I wanted to buy was the Volkswagen Langyi, which was said to be the first car that was jointly made by both Volkswagen companies of Germany and China.

This car was a Class A, so it was not that big, and in other words, it was only enough for five people’s rides. The style of this car was very in line with the Chinese aesthetic and that was why it was my first choice.

At that time, my city only had one Volkswagen 4s store, which was in the southwest part of the city. One day, I went to that store to see Langyi. Next to the Langyi, there was a Passat. I got into the Passat after I checked the Langyi and I suddenly felt very comfortable because the Passat was very spacious and looked much nicer than the Langyi.

A Passat was about 60000RMB more expensive than a Langyi. I was hesitant to buy a Passat although I really liked it.

My family on my wife’s side told me that money is not a problem as long as I liked it-they said they could lend money to me.

In March 2009, I finally bought the first car of my life. The model of the car was Passat 2.0 MFI. I didn’t dare buy Passat 1.8T because it was more expensive than the 2.0 MFI.

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My First Car

My first car was a Volkswagen Passat and I bought it in 2009.

That year, I earned a little money, which was about 120,000 Chinese Yuan.

My family on my wife’s side suggested my wife and I buy a car.

Of course, I also wanted to buy a car, which used to be my dream.

The first car model that I wanted to buy was the Volkswagen Langyi, which was said to be the first car that was jointly made by both Volkswagen companies of Germany and China.

This car was a Class A, so it was not that big, and in other words, it wascould only enough forseat five people’s rides.

The style of this car was very in line with the Chinese aesthetic andso that was why it was my first choice.

At that time, my city only had one Volkswagen 4s store, which and it was in the southwest part of the city.

One day, I went to that store to see a Langyi.

Next to the Langyi, there was a Passat.

I got into the Passat after I checked out the Langyi and I suddenly felt very comfortable because the Passat was very spacious and looked much nicer than the Langyi.

A Passat was about 60,000RMB more expensive than a Langyi.

I was hesitant to buy a Passat although I really liked it.

My family on my wife’s side told me that money iwas not a problem as long as I liked it-they said so they cwould lend the money to me.

In March 2009, I finally bought the first car of my life.

The model of the car was a Passat 2.0 MFI.

I didn’t dare buy a Passat 1.8T because it was more expensive than the 2.0 MFI.

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Jack

Feb. 13, 2023

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Thank you very much!

My First Car

My first car was a Volkswagen Passat, and I bought it in 2009.

That year, I earned a little money, which was about 120,000 Chinese Yuan.

My family on my wife’s side suggested my wife and I buy a car.

Of course, I also wanted to buy a car, which. It used to be my dream to buy a car.

The first car model that I wanted to buy was the Volkswagen Langyi, which was said to be the first car that was jointly made by bothe Volkswagen companies of both Germany and China.

This car was a Class A, so it was not that big, and i. In other words, it was only big enough for five people’s to rides at once.

The style of this car wais very in line with the Chinese aesthetic and that was why it was my first choice.

At that time, my city only had one Volkswagen 4s store, which wasdealership, in the southwest part of the city.

One day, I went to that store to see dealership to look at the Langyi.

Next to the Langyi, there was a Passat.

I got into the Passat after I checked out the Langyi and. I suddenly felt very comfortable because the Passat was very spacious and looked much nicer than the Langyi.

A Passat was about 60,000RMB more expensive than a Langyi.

I was hesitant to buy a Passat although I really liked it.

My family on my wife’s sidein-laws told me that money is not a problem as long as I liked it-they said they could lend money to mee some money.

In March 2009, I finally bought themy first car of my life.

The model of the car wasIt was a Passat 2.0 MFI.

I didn’t dare buy the Passat 1.8T because it was more expensive than the 2.0 MFI.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Feb. 13, 2023

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Thank you very much!

My First Car


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My first car was a Volkswagen Passat and I bought it in 2009.


My first car was a Volkswagen Passat, and I bought it in 2009.

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That year, I earned a little money, which was about 120000 Chinese Yuan.


That year, I earned a little money, which was about 120,000 Chinese Yuan.

That year, I earned a little money, which was about 120,000 Chinese Yuan.

My family on my wife’s side suggested my wife and I buy a car.


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Of course, I also wanted to buy a car, which used to be my dream.


Of course, I also wanted to buy a car, which. It used to be my dream to buy a car.

Of course, I also wanted to buy a car, which used to be my dream.

The first car model that I wanted to buy was the Volkswagen Langyi, which was said to be the first car that was jointly made by both Volkswagen companies of Germany and China.


The first car model that I wanted to buy was the Volkswagen Langyi, which was said to be the first car that was jointly made by bothe Volkswagen companies of both Germany and China.

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This car was a Class A, so it was not that big, and in other words, it was only enough for five people’s rides.


This car was a Class A, so it was not that big, and i. In other words, it was only big enough for five people’s to rides at once.

This car was a Class A, so it was not that big, and in other words, it wascould only enough forseat five people’s rides.

The style of this car was very in line with the Chinese aesthetic and that was why it was my first choice.


The style of this car wais very in line with the Chinese aesthetic and that was why it was my first choice.

The style of this car was very in line with the Chinese aesthetic andso that was why it was my first choice.

At that time, my city only had one Volkswagen 4s store, which was in the southwest part of the city.


At that time, my city only had one Volkswagen 4s store, which wasdealership, in the southwest part of the city.

At that time, my city only had one Volkswagen 4s store, which and it was in the southwest part of the city.

One day, I went to that store to see Langyi.


One day, I went to that store to see dealership to look at the Langyi.

One day, I went to that store to see a Langyi.

Next to the Langyi, there was a Passat.


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I got into the Passat after I checked the Langyi and I suddenly felt very comfortable because the Passat was very spacious and looked much nicer than the Langyi.


I got into the Passat after I checked out the Langyi and. I suddenly felt very comfortable because the Passat was very spacious and looked much nicer than the Langyi.

I got into the Passat after I checked out the Langyi and I suddenly felt very comfortable because the Passat was very spacious and looked much nicer than the Langyi.

A Passat was about 60000RMB more expensive than a Langyi.


A Passat was about 60,000RMB more expensive than a Langyi.

A Passat was about 60,000RMB more expensive than a Langyi.

I was hesitant to buy a Passat although I really liked it.


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My family on my wife’s side told me that money is not a problem as long as I liked it-they said they could lend money to me.


My family on my wife’s sidein-laws told me that money is not a problem as long as I liked it-they said they could lend money to mee some money.

My family on my wife’s side told me that money iwas not a problem as long as I liked it-they said so they cwould lend the money to me.

In March 2009, I finally bought the first car of my life.


In March 2009, I finally bought themy first car of my life.

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The model of the car was Passat 2.0 MFI.


The model of the car wasIt was a Passat 2.0 MFI.

The model of the car was a Passat 2.0 MFI.

I didn’t dare buy Passat 1.8T because it was more expensive than the 2.0 MFI.


I didn’t dare buy the Passat 1.8T because it was more expensive than the 2.0 MFI.

I didn’t dare buy a Passat 1.8T because it was more expensive than the 2.0 MFI.

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