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My first action story

As the plane flew low over the dark fields, Jake waited for a red signal near the forest. But nothing happened for a long time. “What does it mean? – asked Jake himself accusingly, - Where are them? I can’t waste on it all night long!”
He had been circled for twenty minutes around the fields, but it was no the signal anywhere. “It is something unclear” – murmured Jake, - “I should stop my engine, it’s too loud.” Jake landed the plane.
When he opened the cabin, everything kept the silence around him. Jake carefully got out of the plane and gazed on the forest, which was near him. Jake heard only last leaves, which were waved by a little wind. But nothing could break this quiet night.
Jake already forgot, that the nature can be so quiet. Every day he takes off his plane to fight with Germans. It was 1916. Today this fields have to become a battlefield. His job was to find German positions and told it to his general. Infantry should stay in forest and when they heard Jake plane, they should give the red signal. But there was no signal.
“They must have late” – said Jake decisively.
Suddenly, three strange men appeared from the forest. Due to the darkness, Jake couldn’t understand, who was them.
“Jake, why you are so late?” – asked the man, who went ahead.
“I’m just on time, I wait you for an hour.”
“Really? I’m so sorry, Jake! Come with me, you should say everything to the general” – said the man, thoroughly try not to say something wrong. Jake understood it.
“But why you come to me? I think, you will make a red signal…”
“Oh, really? I thought, if we meet you, it could be much safety. Isn’t it?”
“Maybe, yes” – answered Jake. But something strange was in this situation.
He tried to understand, who was these guys.
“Which battalion are you from?”
“From Seven Infantry battalion. Did you forget, Jake?”
“Oh, I’m sorry. It’s only for safety, you know…”
“Don’t worry, Jake, I understand…”
“What about Miky? How is he?”
“Oh, Miky? Miky… - the man was a little disappointed – Not so bad, he feels much better…”
Jake gasped. He looked like he was ready to fight.
“Miky was died in Battle of the Somma in august… You are the spy!”
The man gazed on him for a minute. Two others take their weapon and look at Jake with hostility. Suddenly, the man said ferociously:
“Hande hoch! Ich heise Marcus! Du bist gefangen!”
But Jake quickly jumped to him, took his knife and hit the man in chest. Two other Germans open the fire, Jake drop the knife in one of them and dashed to the plane as quick as he can. But German fell on the ground with deep scream and fire was stopped.
Jake stopped running and glanced on his enemies. All of them were lying on the ground without breath. And one person quickly run to Jake. But now he was his friend, Tomy.
“Jake! It’s me! I’m Tomy! We should go to our general now, German diversionists attacked us tonight, they were one of them!” – said Tomy.
Jake sighed and went to the forest with Tomy.

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My fFirst aAction sStory

As the plane flew low over the dark fields, Jake waited for athe red signal near the forest.

“What does it mean?

Jake asked Jake himself accusingly, - in confusion. “Where are them?y?”.

I cadon’t waste on ithave all night long!”
He had
beenalready circled for twenty minutes around the fields, but it was noand there was still no sign of the signal anywhere.

It is sSomething unclear” –’s up,” murmured Jake, - “. “ I should stop my engine, it’s too loud.. Jake landed the plane.

When he opened the cabin, everything kept thewas silencet all around him.

Jake carefully got out of the plane and gazed upon the forest, which was near him.

Jake heard only last leaves, which were waved by a littlThe only sound Jake could hear was the gentle rustling of leaves caused by the wind.

ButOther than that, nothing else could break this quiet night.

Jake alrehady forgot,ten that the nature can be so quiet.

Every day he takes off in his plane to fight wioff the Germans.

ItThe year was 1916.

Today thisDuring this day and age, the fields have tod become a battlefield.

HiJake’s job was to findlocate German positions and told itbattlefield positions to reveal the locations to his general.

Infantry should stay in forest and when they heard Jake plane, they should give theFor Jake to land his plane safely near the infantry in the forest, his comrades should always fire a red signal.

“They must havbe late, said Jake decisively.

Due to the darkness, Jake couldn’t understand, who was not recognize them.

“Jake, why you are so late?” asked the man, who went aheadone of the men.

“I’m jusright on time,. I waited for you for an hour.” ”.
“Really?

Come with me, you should say everything tolet the general” – know,” said the man, thoroughly trying not to say something wrong.

Jake understood it.

“But why didn’t you come to help me?

I think, you will makought you were going to send me a red signal…”
“Oh, really?

I thought,just figured if we meet youup with you in person, it cwould be much safety.r.

Isn’t iRight?”
Maybe, yes” –I guess,” answered Jake.

But something strange was in this situationThis situation felt off to Jake.

He tried to understand, who was these guys were.

Miky… - the man wasfelt a little disappointed, “Not so bad, he feels much better…” .
Jake gasped.

“Miky was died in Battle ofat the Somma in aAugust… You are the spy!” .
The man gazed
onat him for a minute.

Two others takeSuddenly, the two men revealed their weapons and looked at Jake within hostility.

Suddenly, the man said ferociously: ,
“Hande hoch!

Du bist gefangen!”
But

Not wasting any time,
Jake quickly jumped to him, took his knife, and hitstabbed the man in the chest.

Two other Germans ope spies hiding in the fiore, Jake drop the knife in one of them andst opened fire. Jake dashed to the plane as quickly as he canould.

ButThe German that Jaked injured fell ton the ground with deep scream and fire was stoppedscreaming. The Germans held their fire.

Jake stopped running and glanced onat his enemies.

All of them were lying on the ground without breath.

And oneOut of nowhere, a person quickly runan up to Jake.

But now heIt was his friend, Tomy.

I’mt’s Tomy!

We should go to our general now, German diversionists attacked us tonight, they were one of them!” said Tomy.

My first action story


My fFirst aAction sStory

As the plane flew low over the dark fields, Jake waited for a red signal near the forest.


As the plane flew low over the dark fields, Jake waited for athe red signal near the forest.

But nothing happened for a long time.


“What does it mean?


“What does it mean?

– asked Jake himself accusingly, - Where are them?


Jake asked Jake himself accusingly, - in confusion. “Where are them?y?”.

I can’t waste on it all night long!” He had been circled for twenty minutes around the fields, but it was no the signal anywhere.


I cadon’t waste on ithave all night long!”
He had
beenalready circled for twenty minutes around the fields, but it was noand there was still no sign of the signal anywhere.

“It is something unclear” – murmured Jake, - “I should stop my engine, it’s too loud.” Jake landed the plane.


It is sSomething unclear” –’s up,” murmured Jake, - “. “ I should stop my engine, it’s too loud.. Jake landed the plane.

When he opened the cabin, everything kept the silence around him.


When he opened the cabin, everything kept thewas silencet all around him.

Jake carefully got out of the plane and gazed on the forest, which was near him.


Jake carefully got out of the plane and gazed upon the forest, which was near him.

Jake heard only last leaves, which were waved by a little wind.


Jake heard only last leaves, which were waved by a littlThe only sound Jake could hear was the gentle rustling of leaves caused by the wind.

But nothing could break this quiet night.


ButOther than that, nothing else could break this quiet night.

Jake already forgot, that the nature can be so quiet.


Jake alrehady forgot,ten that the nature can be so quiet.

Every day he takes off his plane to fight with Germans.


Every day he takes off in his plane to fight wioff the Germans.

It was 1916.


ItThe year was 1916.

Today this fields have to become a battlefield.


Today thisDuring this day and age, the fields have tod become a battlefield.

His job was to find German positions and told it to his general.


HiJake’s job was to findlocate German positions and told itbattlefield positions to reveal the locations to his general.

Infantry should stay in forest and when they heard Jake plane, they should give the red signal.


Infantry should stay in forest and when they heard Jake plane, they should give theFor Jake to land his plane safely near the infantry in the forest, his comrades should always fire a red signal.

But there was no signal.


“They must have late” – said Jake decisively.


“They must havbe late, said Jake decisively.

Suddenly, three strange men appeared from the forest.


Due to the darkness, Jake couldn’t understand, who was them.


Due to the darkness, Jake couldn’t understand, who was not recognize them.

“Jake, why you are so late?” – asked the man, who went ahead.


“Jake, why you are so late?” asked the man, who went aheadone of the men.

“I’m just on time, I wait you for an hour.” “Really?


“I’m jusright on time,. I waited for you for an hour.” ”.
“Really?

I’m so sorry, Jake!


Come with me, you should say everything to the general” – said the man, thoroughly try not to say something wrong.


Come with me, you should say everything tolet the general” – know,” said the man, thoroughly trying not to say something wrong.

Jake understood it.


Jake understood it.

“But why you come to me?


“But why didn’t you come to help me?

I think, you will make a red signal…” “Oh, really?


I think, you will makought you were going to send me a red signal…”
“Oh, really?

I thought, if we meet you, it could be much safety.


I thought,just figured if we meet youup with you in person, it cwould be much safety.r.

Isn’t it?” “Maybe, yes” – answered Jake.


Isn’t iRight?”
Maybe, yes” –I guess,” answered Jake.

But something strange was in this situation.


But something strange was in this situationThis situation felt off to Jake.

He tried to understand, who was these guys.


He tried to understand, who was these guys were.

“Which battalion are you from?” “From Seven Infantry battalion.


Did you forget, Jake?” “Oh, I’m sorry.


It’s only for safety, you know…” “Don’t worry, Jake, I understand…” “What about Miky?


How is he?” “Oh, Miky?


Miky… - the man was a little disappointed – Not so bad, he feels much better…” Jake gasped.


Miky… - the man wasfelt a little disappointed, “Not so bad, he feels much better…” .
Jake gasped.

He looked like he was ready to fight.


“Miky was died in Battle of the Somma in august… You are the spy!” The man gazed on him for a minute.


“Miky was died in Battle ofat the Somma in aAugust… You are the spy!” .
The man gazed
onat him for a minute.

Two others take their weapon and look at Jake with hostility.


Two others takeSuddenly, the two men revealed their weapons and looked at Jake within hostility.

Suddenly, the man said ferociously: “Hande hoch!


Suddenly, the man said ferociously: ,
“Hande hoch!

Ich heise Marcus!


Du bist gefangen!” But Jake quickly jumped to him, took his knife and hit the man in chest.


Du bist gefangen!”
But

Not wasting any time,
Jake quickly jumped to him, took his knife, and hitstabbed the man in the chest.

Two other Germans open the fire, Jake drop the knife in one of them and dashed to the plane as quick as he can.


Two other Germans ope spies hiding in the fiore, Jake drop the knife in one of them andst opened fire. Jake dashed to the plane as quickly as he canould.

But German fell on the ground with deep scream and fire was stopped.


ButThe German that Jaked injured fell ton the ground with deep scream and fire was stoppedscreaming. The Germans held their fire.

Jake stopped running and glanced on his enemies.


Jake stopped running and glanced onat his enemies.

All of them were lying on the ground without breath.


All of them were lying on the ground without breath.

And one person quickly run to Jake.


And oneOut of nowhere, a person quickly runan up to Jake.

But now he was his friend, Tomy.


But now heIt was his friend, Tomy.

“Jake!


It’s me!


I’m Tomy!


I’mt’s Tomy!

We should go to our general now, German diversionists attacked us tonight, they were one of them!” – said Tomy.


We should go to our general now, German diversionists attacked us tonight, they were one of them!” said Tomy.

Jake sighed and went to the forest with Tomy.


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