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kazu

May 31, 2020

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My firend's birthday

Today is my best friend's birthday. We've celebrated his birthday every year, but this year we couldn't because of COVID19.We got to know each other when I was a freshman in high school. Then, we became good friends while practicing together on the high school soccer team. Now that he is a best friend that I can talk to about any matter.

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Then, weWe got to know each other when I was a freshman in high school and became good friends whileafter practicing together on the high school soccer team.

I think the two sentences flow better when you combine them like this. :-)

Now that he is amy best friend that, I can talk to him about any matterthing.

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A good friend is worth his/her weight in gold. :-)

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kazu

June 5, 2020

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I think so too:)
Thx!

My firFriend's bBirthday

Today is my best friend's birthday.

We've celebrated his birthday every year, but this year we couldn't because of COVID19. We got to know each other when I was a freshman in high school.

Then, we became good friends while practicing together on the high school soccer team.

Now that he is a best friend that, I can talk to him about any matter.

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How long have you been playing soccer?

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kazu

June 5, 2020

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I had played soccer for about ten years until I went to university.
Thx!

My firend's birthday


My firFriend's bBirthday

Today is my best friend's birthday.


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We've celebrated his birthday every year, but this year we couldn't because of COVID19.We got to know each other when I was a freshman in high school.


We've celebrated his birthday every year, but this year we couldn't because of COVID19. We got to know each other when I was a freshman in high school.

Then, we became good friends while practicing together on the high school soccer team.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then, weWe got to know each other when I was a freshman in high school and became good friends whileafter practicing together on the high school soccer team.

I think the two sentences flow better when you combine them like this. :-)

Now that he is a best friend that I can talk to about any matter.


Now that he is a best friend that, I can talk to him about any matter.

Now that he is amy best friend that, I can talk to him about any matterthing.

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