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Sept. 23, 2023

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My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Languege"

Today is Saturday. I got up near 11 am. It was late for me. Usually I get up at 7 or 8 am. Why I got up so late? In the morning I skipped my alarm. I thought sleep 10 minute and got up. It was my big mistake.
After that I was work little bit. Then I made a lunch and I went center city. Just walked and met friend. I with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers. Honest I rarely ate burgers and similar food.
You ask me: What about English?
I answer. I read one episode comic One Punch Man. I listened 3 episodes podcast. Finnaly I wrote this journal. That's all.
I know it was few but it's good then nothing.

Thank for reading my journal.
See you tomorow.

Corrections

I got up nearound 11 am.

you can also say I woke up

Why did I goet up so late?

In the morning I skippnoozed my alarm.

you can also say ‘hit snooze on’

I thought I would sleep 10 minute andore minutes then goet up.

the tense of this sentence is a hypothetical action in the past

IThat was mya big mistake.

After that I was workorked a little bit.

Then I made a lunch and I went center citydowntown.

In the US you would call the city center downtown.

Just walked and met a friend.

I with met my friend met inat Burger King and ate some burgers.

Honestly, I rarely eate burgers andor similar food.

You may ask me: What about English?

I will answer.:

I read one episodissue of the comic One Punch Man.

I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast.

Finnally I wrote this journal.

I know it was fewn’t a lot but it's goodbetter thean nothing.

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Good job sticking to your practice! However light or intensive :)

My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Langueage"

Today is Saturday.

I got up nearat around 11 am.

It was late for me.

Usually I get up at 7 or 8 am.

Why did I goet up so late?

I thought I'd sleep for 10 minute and gotore minutes before getting up.

Also could be written as "I wanted to sleep for 10 more minutes before getting up."

IThat was mya big mistake.

Sounds a bit unnatural to me, so I gave it a slight adjustment.

After that I was workorked for a little bit.

Then I made a lunch and I went to center city.

JustI just took a walked and met up with friend.

hung out instead of met up can also work!

I met with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers.

Honestly, I rarely eate burgers and similar food things like burgers.

You might ask me: "What about your English? studies?"

IThese are my answers.

I read one episodchapter of the comic One Punch Man.

I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast.

Finnally, I wrote this journal.

That's all.

I know it was fewn't much but it's goodbetter thean nothing.

Thank you for reading my journal.

Or "Thanks" which is more casual.

See you tomorow.

See you tomorow.


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My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Languege"


My fifth journal: "How I am learning the English Langueage"

Today is Saturday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I got up near 11 am.


I got up nearat around 11 am.

I got up nearound 11 am.

you can also say I woke up

It was late for me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Usually I get up at 7 or 8 am.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why I got up so late?


Why did I goet up so late?

Why did I goet up so late?

In the morning I skipped my alarm.


In the morning I skippnoozed my alarm.

you can also say ‘hit snooze on’

I thought sleep 10 minute and got up.


I thought I'd sleep for 10 minute and gotore minutes before getting up.

Also could be written as "I wanted to sleep for 10 more minutes before getting up."

I thought I would sleep 10 minute andore minutes then goet up.

the tense of this sentence is a hypothetical action in the past

It was my big mistake.


IThat was mya big mistake.

Sounds a bit unnatural to me, so I gave it a slight adjustment.

IThat was mya big mistake.

After that I was work little bit.


After that I was workorked for a little bit.

After that I was workorked a little bit.

Then I made a lunch and I went center city.


Then I made a lunch and I went to center city.

Then I made a lunch and I went center citydowntown.

In the US you would call the city center downtown.

Just walked and met friend.


JustI just took a walked and met up with friend.

hung out instead of met up can also work!

Just walked and met a friend.

I with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers.


I met with my friend met in Burger King and ate some burgers.

I with met my friend met inat Burger King and ate some burgers.

Honest I rarely ate burgers and similar food.


Honestly, I rarely eate burgers and similar food things like burgers.

Honestly, I rarely eate burgers andor similar food.

You ask me: What about English?


You might ask me: "What about your English? studies?"

You may ask me: What about English?

I answer.


IThese are my answers.

I will answer.:

I read one episode comic One Punch Man.


I read one episodchapter of the comic One Punch Man.

I read one episodissue of the comic One Punch Man.

I listened 3 episodes podcast.


I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast.

I listened to 3 episodes of a podcast.

Finnaly I wrote this journal.


Finnally, I wrote this journal.

Finnally I wrote this journal.

That's all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know it was few but it's good then nothing.


I know it was fewn't much but it's goodbetter thean nothing.

I know it was fewn’t a lot but it's goodbetter thean nothing.

Thank for reading my journal.


Thank you for reading my journal.

Or "Thanks" which is more casual.

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