Feb. 9, 2025
My Fifth Attempt at Writing English
Today is Anna's birthday. She invited her friend, Tommy and Petter, to her house. Tommy and Petter prepared a present for her. Tommy gave boots to her, Petter gave a ball. She liked the presents. They went outside to the football field.
My Fifth Attempt at Writing English
Today is Anna's birthday.
She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house.
There are more than one friend
Tommy and Petter prepared a present for her.
Tommy gave her boots to her,and Petter gave her a ball.
She liked the presents.
Then, they went outside to the football field.
"then" makes this flow a little better
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Well done :)
My Fifth Attempt at Writing English
Today is Anna's birthday.
She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house.
I’m not sure if you meant to say “Petter,” but “Peter” is a common English name.
Tommy and Petter prepared a present for her.
Tommy gave boots to her, and Petter gave a ball.
She liked the presents.
They went outside to the football field.
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Good job!
She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house.
Tommy and Petter prepared a presents for her.
Tommy gave her boots to her,and Petter gave her a ball.
She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house.
Peter is traditionally spelt with one t.
S is added at the end of friend to make it plural.
Tommy and Petter prepared a presents for her.
You could also write:
Tommy and Peter each prepared a present for her.
Tommy gave her boots to her, Petter gave her a ball.
She liked the presents.!
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Only minor changes. Good work!
She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house.
Tommy and Petter prepared a presents for her.
When present is in a singular form, it sounds like Tommy and Petter prepared a present for Anna together.
Tommy gave her boots to her,, and Petter gave a ball.
It could also be "Tommy had given boots to her". Typically, this way is to denote if this event happened before another event.
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Overall, you did a great job! Keep it up! :D
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She invited her friend, Tommy and Petter, to her house. She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house. She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house. She invited her friends, Tommy and Pet Peter is traditionally spelt with one t. S is added at the end of friend to make it plural. She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house. She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house. I’m not sure if you meant to say “Petter,” but “Peter” is a common English name. She invited her friends, Tommy and Petter, to her house. There are more than one friend |
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Tommy and Petter prepared a present for her. Tommy and Petter prepared When present is in a singular form, it sounds like Tommy and Petter prepared a present for Anna together. Tommy and Pet You could also write: Tommy and Peter each prepared a present for her. Tommy and Petter prepared This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Tommy gave boots to her, Petter gave a ball. Tommy gave her boots It could also be "Tommy had given boots to her". Typically, this way is to denote if this event happened before another event. Tommy gave her boots Tommy gave her boots Tommy gave boots to her, and Petter gave a ball. Tommy gave her boots |
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She liked the presents. She liked the presents This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They went outside to the football field. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then, they went outside to the football field. "then" makes this flow a little better |
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