Dec. 19, 2023
My Fiend Who Loves Hawaiian Dance #2
This is a continuation from my last post.
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance had a stroke three months ago. She is still in the hospital, and really hard doing physical therapy.
The other day, she joined a Hawaiian dance festival. She can barely walk with a stick, but she needs someone support by her.
She had been always looking forward to dance on the stage of the festival, so maybe she didn't want to give up.
She turned up in a wheelchair with 7 dancers and one of them pushed it and took her to the middle of the stage.
これは、前回の私の投稿からの続きです。
私のハワイアンダンスの大好きな友達が3か月前、脳梗塞になりました。彼女は、まだ病院に入院していて、毎日リハビリを頑張っています。
その彼女が先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。彼女は、杖を使ってなんとか歩けますが、まだ誰か隣で支えてくれる人が必要です。
彼女は、このステージで踊ることをずっと楽しみにしていました。だからあきらめたくなかったと思います。
彼女は、車椅子で7人のダンサーと一緒に舞台に現れました。ダンサーの一人が車椅子押してを彼女を舞台の真ん中まで連れて行きました。
My Friend Who Loves Hawaiian Dance #2
"Fiend" has a completely different meaning. :)
This is a continuation from my last post.
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance had a stroke three months ago.
She is still in the hospital, and working really hard doing physical therapy everyday.
毎日 = everyday
The other day, she joined a Hawaiian dance festival.
She canould barely walk with a stick, but she and needsed someone to support by her.
She had been always looking forward to danceing on theis stage of the festival, so maybe she didn't want, and therefore refused to give up.
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Dec. 19, 2023
Thank you so much!
My Fiend Who Loves Hawaiian Dance #2
This is a continuation from my last post.
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance had a stroke three months ago.
She is still in the hospital, and undergoing really hard doing, physical therapy.
The other day, she joined a Hawaiian dance festival.
She can barely walk with a stick, butso she needs someone support bying her.
Alternatively:
She can walk with a stick, but she needs someone supporting her.
She had been always looking forward to danceing on the stage ofat the festival, so maybe she didn't want to give up.
She turned up in a wheelchair with 7 dancers, and one of them pushed it for her and took her to the middle of the stage.
Dec. 19, 2023
Thank you so much!
My Fiend Who Loves Hawaiian Dance #2
My friend who loves Hawaiien dance - stylistically do not capitalise every word
This is a continuation from my last post.
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance had a stroke three months ago.
She is still in the hospital, and really hard doingdoing strenuous physical therapy.
The other day, she joined a Hawaiian dance festival.class.
She can barely walk with a stick, but and she needs someone support by her.
She had been always looking forward to danceing on the stage ofat the festival, so maybe she didn't want to give up.
She turned up in a wheelchair with 7 other dancers and one of them pushed it the wheelchair and took her to the middle of the stage.
Dec. 19, 2023
Thank you so much.
My Friend Who Loves Hawaiian Dance #2
This is a continuation ofrom my last post.
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance had a stroke three months ago.
She is still in the hospital, and reallyis working hard doing physical therapy.
The other day, she joined a Hawaiian dance festival.
She can barely walk with a stick, butso she needs someone to support by her.
She had been always been looking forward to danceing on the stage of the festival, so maybe she didn't want to give up.
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She turned up in a wheelchair with 7 dancers, and one of them pushed it and took her to the middle of the stage.
Dec. 19, 2023
Thank you so much for explaining in detailed.
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