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barbarasilva

Dec. 10, 2024

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My fears

So, the next year be near, and I want enfreted my fears.

My dream is to learn English and try a occupation of my area in another contry. I don't know if I will can it, but I will try with all my forces.

I fear about stay alone, without someone for my support.

But I dont want remember of my past and stay bad for thinks that I dont have courage to do.

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So, the next year beis near, and I want enfretedto face my fears.

My dream is to learn English and try an occupation ofin my area in another country.

I don't know if I will cando it, but I will try with all my forcesmight.

I fearam afraid about staying alone, without someone for myto support me.

But I don't want to remember of my past and stayfeel bad for thinkgs that I don't have the courage to do.

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Good job! There's a saying in English, "How do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time!". One step everyday and you'll get there!

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barbarasilva

Dec. 11, 2024

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Thanks!

My dream is to learn English and try a occupation of my area in another contry.


My dream is to learn English and try an occupation ofin my area in another country.

I don't know if I will can it, but I will try with all my forces.


I don't know if I will cando it, but I will try with all my forcesmight.

I fear about stay alone, without someone for my support.


I fearam afraid about staying alone, without someone for myto support me.

But I dont want remember of my past and stay bad for thinks that I dont have courage to do.


But I don't want to remember of my past and stayfeel bad for thinkgs that I don't have the courage to do.

My fears


So, the next year be near, and I want enfreted my fears.


So, the next year beis near, and I want enfretedto face my fears.

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