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March 19, 2025

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My favourite things

Hello guys. Now I want to write about my favourite things and what I like to watch, learn. I like to read books about religion and psychology. It's very interesting theme for me. Because of now there are more podcasts and books about psychology, the same thing is repeated. For that reason, now I read about religion than psychology. My religion Islam and now I very want to know more this religion. Islam is very best religion for me. I think that I have to learn and take more knowledge when I have a wish. I want to write about Islam tomorrow. I like to watch k-drama. What I like to watch k-drama? The first, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way. Usually I think we have feelings for each other. The second, their script is very cool and unusual. My favourite k-drama which is called «Twinkling Watermelon» and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook. That is all, bye-bye.

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My fFavourite tThings

Capitalization rules in your title.

Now I want to write about my favourite things and what I like to watch, and learn.

I added "and" between "watch" and "learn" to make the sentence grammatically correct.

It'sThese are very interesting theme foropics to me.

"Theme" is singular, but you're talking about multiple topics, so "topics" is more appropriate. "To me" sounds more natural than "for me.

Because of nowNowadays, there are moreany podcasts and books about psychology, but the same thing iss keep repeated.ing

"Because of now" is awkward. "Nowadays" is a better phrase for this context. I changed "the same thing is repeated" to "the same things keep repeating" for smoother phrasing.

For that reason, now I read I am currently reading more about religion than psychology.

"Now" is placed awkwardly, so "currently" is used instead to fit better with the sentence. "Read about religion than psychology" should be "reading more about religion than psychology" to make it grammatically correct.

My religion is Islam, and now I verI really want to knowlearn more this religionabout it.

Added "is" to make the sentence complete. "I very want" sounds unnatural, so "I really want" is more common. Also, "more this religion" should be "more about it" for clarity.

Islam is verythe best religion for me.

"Very best" is redundant.

I thinkbelieve that I have toshould keep learning and takegaining more knowledge whenever I have a wishthe desire to do so.

"I think that I have to learn" sounds a bit unclear. "I believe" is a stronger and more natural way of expressing the same idea. "Take more knowledge" is awkward, so I changed it to "gaining more knowledge."

I like toalso enjoy watch king K-dramas.

The phrase "I like to watch" is fine, but "I also enjoy watching" fits better for variation and flow. "K-drama" is typically pluralized as "K-dramas" when referring to the genre in general.

What do I like to watch k-dramaabout them?

The sentence needs to be structured as a question, so "What do I like about them?" is grammatically correct.

The fFirst, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.

"The first" should be just "First" to sound natural.

Usually I think we have feelings for each other.I often feel that we can relate to the emotions they portray

Rewording it to "I often feel that we can relate to the emotions they portray" makes it clearer and fits better with the context.

The sSecond, their script iss are very coolinteresting and unusual.ique

"The second" is incorrect here; it should just be "Second." Also, "script" is usually pluralized as "scripts" when referring to multiple shows. "Cool and unusual" is a bit informal, so "interesting and unique" sounds more polished.

My favourite kK-drama which is called «Twinkling Watermelon» and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.

I capitalized "K-drama" to match the proper noun.

Feedback

It's nice that you're interested in learning more about your religion. I also like to watch K-dramas during my free time. I've heard that Twinkling Watermelon is good but I am currently watching a K-drama with the title Melo Movies. I hope you can make a review also about Twinkling Watermelon!

My favourite things

Hello guys.

Now I want to writetalk about my favourite things and, what I like to watch, and learn.

I like to read books abouton religion and psychology.

It'sThey're very interesting themesubjects for me.

Because of now there are more podcasts and books about psychology nowadays, the same thing is repeated.

Not sure what you mean by "the same thing is repeated"?

For that reason, now I read more about religion now than psychology.

My religion is Islam and now I verI really want to know more this religion.

For me, Islam is verythe best religion for me.

I think that I have to learn and take more knowledge when I have a wishwish to learn and gather more information about it.

I was confused by this sentence, so I tried my best to rewrite it.

I want to write about Islam tomorrow.

I like to watch k-dK-Dramas.

Whaty do I like to watch k-dK-Dramas?

In the next 2 lines, you give reasons why you like to watch K-Dramas, so I edited your question a little bit.

The fFirstly, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.

Usually I think weI often believe the characters have feelings for each other.

The sSecondly, their script story is very cool and unusualique.

My favourite k-dK-Drama which is called «"Twinkling Watermelon»" and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.

In English, our quotation marks are " ".

That is all, bye-bye.

Hello guys.

Now I want to write about my favourite things and what I like to watch, learn.

I like to read books about religion and psychology.

It'sThese are very interesting themeopics for me.

Because of nNow there are more podcasts and books about psychology, but the same thing is repeated.concepts get repeated over and over.

For that reason, now I read about religion than psychology.

My religion is Islam and now I veryI want to know more thisabout my religion.

For me, Islam is very bestthe better religion for me.

I think that I have to learn and takegather more knowledge when I have a wishabout it.

I like to watch k-dramas.

Whaty do I like to watch k-dramas?

The fFirst, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.

Usually I think weIt feels like the characters really have feelings for each other.

The sSecondly, their script is story is often very cool and unusual.

My favourite k-drama which is called «Twinkling Watermelon» and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.

My favourite things


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My fFavourite tThings

Capitalization rules in your title.

Hello guys.


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Now I want to write about my favourite things and what I like to watch, learn.


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Now I want to writetalk about my favourite things and, what I like to watch, and learn.

Now I want to write about my favourite things and what I like to watch, and learn.

I added "and" between "watch" and "learn" to make the sentence grammatically correct.

I like to read books about religion and psychology.


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I like to read books abouton religion and psychology.

It's very interesting theme for me.


It'sThese are very interesting themeopics for me.

It'sThey're very interesting themesubjects for me.

It'sThese are very interesting theme foropics to me.

"Theme" is singular, but you're talking about multiple topics, so "topics" is more appropriate. "To me" sounds more natural than "for me.

Because of now there are more podcasts and books about psychology, the same thing is repeated.


Because of nNow there are more podcasts and books about psychology, but the same thing is repeated.concepts get repeated over and over.

Because of now there are more podcasts and books about psychology nowadays, the same thing is repeated.

Not sure what you mean by "the same thing is repeated"?

Because of nowNowadays, there are moreany podcasts and books about psychology, but the same thing iss keep repeated.ing

"Because of now" is awkward. "Nowadays" is a better phrase for this context. I changed "the same thing is repeated" to "the same things keep repeating" for smoother phrasing.

The second, their script is very cool and unusual.


The sSecondly, their script is story is often very cool and unusual.

The sSecondly, their script story is very cool and unusualique.

The sSecond, their script iss are very coolinteresting and unusual.ique

"The second" is incorrect here; it should just be "Second." Also, "script" is usually pluralized as "scripts" when referring to multiple shows. "Cool and unusual" is a bit informal, so "interesting and unique" sounds more polished.

My favourite k-drama which is called «Twinkling Watermelon» and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.


My favourite k-drama which is called «Twinkling Watermelon» and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.

My favourite k-dK-Drama which is called «"Twinkling Watermelon»" and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.

In English, our quotation marks are " ".

My favourite kK-drama which is called «Twinkling Watermelon» and my favourite actor is Choi Hyun-Wook.

I capitalized "K-drama" to match the proper noun.

That is all, bye-bye.


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For that reason, now I read about religion than psychology.


For that reason, now I read about religion than psychology.

For that reason, now I read more about religion now than psychology.

For that reason, now I read I am currently reading more about religion than psychology.

"Now" is placed awkwardly, so "currently" is used instead to fit better with the sentence. "Read about religion than psychology" should be "reading more about religion than psychology" to make it grammatically correct.

My religion Islam and now I very want to know more this religion.


My religion is Islam and now I veryI want to know more thisabout my religion.

My religion is Islam and now I verI really want to know more this religion.

My religion is Islam, and now I verI really want to knowlearn more this religionabout it.

Added "is" to make the sentence complete. "I very want" sounds unnatural, so "I really want" is more common. Also, "more this religion" should be "more about it" for clarity.

Islam is very best religion for me.


For me, Islam is very bestthe better religion for me.

For me, Islam is verythe best religion for me.

Islam is verythe best religion for me.

"Very best" is redundant.

I think that I have to learn and take more knowledge when I have a wish.


I think that I have to learn and takegather more knowledge when I have a wishabout it.

I think that I have to learn and take more knowledge when I have a wishwish to learn and gather more information about it.

I was confused by this sentence, so I tried my best to rewrite it.

I thinkbelieve that I have toshould keep learning and takegaining more knowledge whenever I have a wishthe desire to do so.

"I think that I have to learn" sounds a bit unclear. "I believe" is a stronger and more natural way of expressing the same idea. "Take more knowledge" is awkward, so I changed it to "gaining more knowledge."

I want to write about Islam tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like to watch k-drama.


I like to watch k-dramas.

I like to watch k-dK-Dramas.

I like toalso enjoy watch king K-dramas.

The phrase "I like to watch" is fine, but "I also enjoy watching" fits better for variation and flow. "K-drama" is typically pluralized as "K-dramas" when referring to the genre in general.

What I like to watch k-drama?


Whaty do I like to watch k-dramas?

Whaty do I like to watch k-dK-Dramas?

In the next 2 lines, you give reasons why you like to watch K-Dramas, so I edited your question a little bit.

What do I like to watch k-dramaabout them?

The sentence needs to be structured as a question, so "What do I like about them?" is grammatically correct.

The first, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.


The fFirst, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.

The fFirstly, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.

The fFirst, there are always very beautiful actors and they convey the love between the characters in a very realistic way.

"The first" should be just "First" to sound natural.

Usually I think we have feelings for each other.


Usually I think weIt feels like the characters really have feelings for each other.

Usually I think weI often believe the characters have feelings for each other.

Usually I think we have feelings for each other.I often feel that we can relate to the emotions they portray

Rewording it to "I often feel that we can relate to the emotions they portray" makes it clearer and fits better with the context.

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