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Dec. 18, 2020

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My Favourite Song

Today I'd like to write about two of my favourite songs.
The first one is Lotus, by Susumu Hirasawa.
This song is one of my favourites because it is powerful and mysterious, with a maternal and enveloping tenderness.
The second song is "Sunao" by Noriyuki Makihara.
When I was little, my mother liked Noriyuki Makihara's songs and often played his songs while we were riding in the car.


今日私は好きな曲を2曲を書いていこうと思う。
1つ目は平沢進さんの作品であるLotus。
この曲は力強く神秘的で、母性的で包み込むようなやさしさを感じさせてくれる私のお気に入りの曲です。
2つ目は槇原敬之さんの作品である素直。
この曲は私が小さいころに、母が槇原敬之さんの曲が好きで、車に乗っている最中によく槇原敬之さんの曲を流していて、その曲の中で私が気に入った曲で、聞くたびに懐かしい気持ちと優しい気持ちにさせてくれる曲です。

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My Favourite Song

Today I'd like to write about two of my favourite songs.

The first one is "Lotus," by Susumu Hirasawa.

This song is one of my favourites because it is powerful and mysterious, with a maternal and envelopingenveloping and maternal tenderness.

"It is" is commonly written as "It's".

The second song is "Sunao" by Noriyuki Makihara.

When I was little, my mother liked Noriyuki Makihara's songs and often played his songsthem while we were riding in the car.

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My Favourite Song


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Today I'd like to write about two of my favourite songs.


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The first one is Lotus, by Susumu Hirasawa.


The first one is "Lotus," by Susumu Hirasawa.

This song is one of my favourites because it is powerful and mysterious, with a maternal and enveloping tenderness.


This song is one of my favourites because it is powerful and mysterious, with a maternal and envelopingenveloping and maternal tenderness.

"It is" is commonly written as "It's".

The second song is "Sunao" by Noriyuki Makihara.


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When I was little, my mother liked Noriyuki Makihara's songs and often played his songs while we were riding in the car.


When I was little, my mother liked Noriyuki Makihara's songs and often played his songsthem while we were riding in the car.

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