May 16, 2025
My favourite season
My favourite season is summer, especially the early part of it.
Early summer is the time when it's still not hot, yet warm already, plus there aren't many mosquitoes at that time. Moreover the summer break begins and the amount of free time I have increases drastically. I always plan my trips to relatives on summer time, so that I could spend a few days with them. Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street both in the morning and in the evening, but due to my allergy on late blooming I easily get sick at that time.
My favourite season
My favourite season is summer, especially the early part of it.
Early summer is the time when it's still not hot, yebut warm already, plus there aren't many mosquitoes atround thatis time.
"yet" does not sound natural here. "warm already" conflicts with the statement "still not hot", do you mean "just warm" as a comparison to its being hot? "around this" sounds a bit more natural.
Moreover the summer break begins and the amount of free time I have increases drastically.
I always plan my trips to relatives onduring summer time, so that I couldI can spend a few days with them.
You've switched tenses during the sentence: "I plan" vs "I could". "I can" would fit with the rest of the paragraph.
Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street both in the morning and in the evening, but due to my allergy on late blooming I easily get sick at that. However late blooming brings on my allergies, so I get sick easily around this time.
I would cut this sentence in two. You're introducing a contrasting idea (the fact you get allergies, despite you enjoying summer) and two separate sentences makes this contrast clearer. I would avoid starting new sentences with "but" and use "however". Minor... "I get sick easily" sounds more natural. Very minor... I would stay "my allergies" as we tend to use the plural when talking about general allergies in a non-medical context.
My favourite season
My favourite season is summer, especially the early part of it.
Early summer is the time when it's still not hot, yet warm already, pwarm but not yet hot. Plus there aren't many mosquitoes around at that time.
It doesn't sound right to say something is "still" without a before condition. For example: "I thought it would be ready but it's still cooking."
Moreover the summer break begins and the amount of free time I have increases drastically.
I always plan my trips to see my relatives onduring summer time, so that I couldan spend a few days with them.
Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street both in the morning and in the evening, b. But due to my allergy onies from late blooming flowers, I easily get sick at that time.
Apologies if that's not what you meant.
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Summer is very nic. Great job! I prefer late summer as it starts to cool down into autumn :)
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Early summer is the time when it's still not hot, yet warm already, plus there aren't many mosquitoes at that time. Early summer is the time when it's It doesn't sound right to say something is "still" without a before condition. For example: "I thought it would be ready but it's still cooking." Early summer is the time when it's still not hot, "yet" does not sound natural here. "warm already" conflicts with the statement "still not hot", do you mean "just warm" as a comparison to its being hot? "around this" sounds a bit more natural. |
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My favourite season is summer, especially the early part of it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover the summer break begins and the amount of free time I have increases drastically. Moreover the summer break begins and the amount of free time I have increases drastically. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I always plan my trips to relatives on summer time, so that I could spend a few days with them. I always plan my trips to see my relatives I always plan my trips to relatives You've switched tenses during the sentence: "I plan" vs "I could". "I can" would fit with the rest of the paragraph. |
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Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street both in the morning and in the evening, but due to my allergy on late blooming I easily get sick at that time. Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street both in the morning and in the evening Apologies if that's not what you meant. Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street both in the morning and in the evening I would cut this sentence in two. You're introducing a contrasting idea (the fact you get allergies, despite you enjoying summer) and two separate sentences makes this contrast clearer. I would avoid starting new sentences with "but" and use "however". Minor... "I get sick easily" sounds more natural. Very minor... I would stay "my allergies" as we tend to use the plural when talking about general allergies in a non-medical context. |
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My favourite season is summer, especially early part of it. |
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Another reason why I like summer is the fact that I prefer walking my dog when it's still bright on the street, but due to my allergy on late blooming I easily get sick at that time. |
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