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When you're writing a topic, it's either everything should be in the capital letter or all the first letter of the words (except particles in between the sentence like a, an, and the.

First, I was born inat the end of February.

And tThe second isreason is the New Years.

Here we celebrated New Year from 31sth December to 1sth January.

For numbers ending with 1, it's 1st, for example, 21st, 31st except 11, which is 11th.
For numbers ending with 2, it's 2nd, for example, 22nd, except 12, which is 12th.
For numbers ending with 3, it's 3rd, for example, 23rd, except 13, which is 13th.
For other numbers, it ends with 'th', for example, 15th.

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I should always be in the capital letter.

And iI always waited everyfor New Years so much.

I remembered when iI got up early on the 1sth of January i, I would jumped up and raun to the Christmas tree.

I liked to open my sweet gifts and put every sweets in a row and counted them.

Also, iI love winter because of the temperature.

Here we have a huge differentce between summer’s temperature and winter’s temperature.

In the winter, we have up to minus 35 degrees.

You arWe always wear warm sweater,s, a down jacket, a scarf and mittens.

I love the smell of cold air at the frost.

It is unwritable feelingsdifficult to explain.

On the one hand, your nostrils start to froeeze, on the others your scarf gets warm.

First, I was born inat the end of February.

And the second is New Years.

This is okay. But I would combine this sentence and the next one together.

e.g.
"The second reason is that I really like New Years celebrations".

Here, we celebrated New Year from 31sth December to 1sth January.

Up to nine years intil the age of nine, I believed in Father Christmas(i see (I recently saw this word in English for the first time!).

And i waited everyI anticipated New Years's Eve so much.

I remembered that when iI got up early on the 1sth of January i jumped up, I would jump out of bed and raun to the Christmas tree.

I liked to open mythe sweet gift and put every sweetss (or, candy), put them all in a row, and counted them.

Also, iI love winter because of the temperature.

Here, we have a huge different between the summer’s temperature and winter’s temperatures.

In the winter we have up to, it can get as low as minus 35 degrees.

You are always wearing a warm sweater, down jacket, scarf and mittens.

I love the smell of cold air atduring the frost.

It is unwritable feelings.

Not sure what you mean here..

On the one hand, your nostrils start to froeeze, and on the others, your scarf get warm.