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My favourite seasion

in the year has 12 months,4 seasion. Every seasions have its months. 4 seasion have autumn,winter,spring and summer. My favourite seasion is winter. because i don't like hot month. i sweat a lot, and that felt discomfort me. in Winter rains snow and rain. I like cold weather, especially wind weather.

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My fFavourite sSeasion

in theA year has 12 months, and 4 seasions.

Every seasions haves its months.

The 4 seasion havs are aAutumn,w Winter,s Spring and sSummer.

My favourite seasion is wWinter.

Join this line and the next as it needs to either be one sentence or be linked with a semi-colon (;)

because iI don't like the hot months.

iI sweat a lot, and that felt discomfortdoesn't feel comfortable for me.

iIn Winter rains, it snows and rains.

I like cold weather, especially windy weather.

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Great job! Your English is really good and you've really explored the topic :)

My fFavourite sSeasion

Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.

in theA year has 12 months, 4 seasions.

"Season" should be plural ("seasons"), since there are more than one season.

Every seasions haves its (own) months.

The noun following "every" is generally singular: "every time", "every day", "every person", etc.

The 4 seasions we have are autumn, winter, spring and summer.

Typically, when listing the seasons, we'd use this order instead: spring, summer, autumn, winter.

My favourite seasion is winter.,

I changed the period to a comma so it can be merged with the sentence below.

because iI don't like hot months.

(1) Merge this sentence with the one above.
(2) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised.

iI sweat a lot, and that felt disels uncomfort mable.

iIn Wwinter it rains, snows and rains again.

Alternatively, you don't have to repeat "rains": "In winter it rains and snows." Repeating it does feel literary though, which I think is nice.

I like cold weather, especially wind weathery days.

"Wind weather" is not a phrase we use.

My favourite seasion


My fFavourite sSeasion

Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.

My fFavourite sSeasion

in the year has 12 months,4 seasion.


in theA year has 12 months, 4 seasions.

"Season" should be plural ("seasons"), since there are more than one season.

in theA year has 12 months, and 4 seasions.

Every seasions have its months.


Every seasions haves its (own) months.

The noun following "every" is generally singular: "every time", "every day", "every person", etc.

Every seasions haves its months.

4 seasion have autumn,winter,spring and summer.


The 4 seasions we have are autumn, winter, spring and summer.

Typically, when listing the seasons, we'd use this order instead: spring, summer, autumn, winter.

The 4 seasion havs are aAutumn,w Winter,s Spring and sSummer.

My favourite seasion is winter.


My favourite seasion is winter.,

I changed the period to a comma so it can be merged with the sentence below.

My favourite seasion is wWinter.

Join this line and the next as it needs to either be one sentence or be linked with a semi-colon (;)

because i don't like hot month.


because iI don't like hot months.

(1) Merge this sentence with the one above. (2) The pronoun "I" is always capitalised.

because iI don't like the hot months.

i sweat a lot, and that felt discomfort me.


iI sweat a lot, and that felt disels uncomfort mable.

iI sweat a lot, and that felt discomfortdoesn't feel comfortable for me.

in Winter rains snow and rain.


iIn Wwinter it rains, snows and rains again.

Alternatively, you don't have to repeat "rains": "In winter it rains and snows." Repeating it does feel literary though, which I think is nice.

iIn Winter rains, it snows and rains.

I like cold weather, especially wind weather.


I like cold weather, especially wind weathery days.

"Wind weather" is not a phrase we use.

I like cold weather, especially windy weather.

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