Jan. 6, 2026
My favourite TV show
Hi, my name is Facundo and my favourite TV show is PLM, it's a program on streaming, the name of the channel is Vorterix. In this show we can show five friends talking about different topics, for example football, famous people, fashion, and randoms topics.
The host name's is Lucas Rodriguez, and his right hand is Roberto galatti, "the Galgo", they are comics and streamers. On the other way, there's Alfredo Montes de Oca, he is a sports journalist, also there's German Beder, he too is a sports journalist and a writer, German writed five books in his life, and the fiveth Stone is Joaquin Cavanna, a different man, he's a nervous person and always moving.
This program is the most entertaining in my opinion, because they are funny guys and have great chemistry with each other.
Hola, mi nombre es Facundo y mi programa favorito de television es PLM, es un programa de streaming, el nombre del canal es Vorterix. En este show podemos ver a cinco personas hablando de diferentes temas, por ejemplo futbol, gente famosa, moda, y temas random.
El nombre del conductor es Lucas Rodrigues, y su mano derecha es Roberto Galatti "El galgo", son comicos y stremers. Por otro lado esta Alfredo Montes de Oca, el es periodista deportivo, tambien esta German Beder, el tambien es periodista deportivo y escritor, German escribio cinco libros en su vida, y el quinto Stone es joaquin Cavanna, un hombre diferente, el es una persona nerviosa y siempre se esta moviendo.
Este programa es el mas entretenido en mi opinion, porque ellos son graciosos y tienen quimica entre si.
My favourite TV show
Hi, my name is Facundo and my favourite TV show is PLM, it's a program on streaming, on the name of the channel is Vorterix channel.
This sentence is a bit long. Maybe split in the middle and make it 2 sentences?
IE. Hi, my name is Facundo and my favourite TV show is PLM. It's a program on streaming, on the Vorterix channel.
In this show we can showthere are five friends talking about different topics, for example football, famous people, fashion, and randoms topics.
The host name's is Lucas Rodriguez, and his right hand is Roberto gGalatti, "the Galgo", they are comicedians and streamers.
You could also split this sentence.
IE. The host name's is Lucas Rodriguez, and his right hand is Roberto Galatti, "the Galgo". They are comedians and streamers.
On the other way, tThere's also Alfredo Montes de Oca, he is a sports journalist, also there'snd German Beder, he too is a sports journalist and a writer,. German has writedten five books in his life, and t. The fivefth Stonehost is Joaquin Cavanna, a different man, he'who is a nervous person and always moving around.
This sentence was also too long. Try to avoid run-on sentences.
You could use you word fidgeting to describe Joaquin Cavanna, if that is what you mean?
This program is the most entertaining in my opinion, because they are funny guys and have great chemistry with each other.
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Excellent writing. Some of the sentences were just a bit too long. Otherwise great job!
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Hi, my name is Facundo and my favourite TV show is PLM, it's a program on streaming, the name of the channel is Vorterix. Hi, my name is Facundo and my favourite TV show is PLM, it's a program on streaming, on the This sentence is a bit long. Maybe split in the middle and make it 2 sentences? IE. Hi, my name is Facundo and my favourite TV show is PLM. It's a program on streaming, on the Vorterix channel. |
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In this show we can show five friends talking about different topics, for example football, famous people, fashion, and randoms topics. In this show |
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The host name's is Lucas Rodriguez, and his right hand is Roberto galatti, "the Galgo", they are comics and streamers. The host name's is Lucas Rodriguez, and his right hand is Roberto You could also split this sentence. IE. The host name's is Lucas Rodriguez, and his right hand is Roberto Galatti, "the Galgo". They are comedians and streamers. |
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On the other way, there's Alfredo Montes de Oca, he is a sports journalist, also there's German Beder, he too is a sports journalist and a writer, German writed five books in his life, and the fiveth Stone is Joaquin Cavanna, a different man, he's a nervous person and always moving.
This sentence was also too long. Try to avoid run-on sentences. You could use you word fidgeting to describe Joaquin Cavanna, if that is what you mean? |
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This program is the most entertaining in my opinion, because they are funny guys and have great chemistry with each other. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favourite TV show This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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