July 17, 2025
Since my childhood, I've fond of cars. My family says that I used to find the car advertisements in newspapers to see the cars. My favourite car brand in childhood was Audi. I used to cut the Audi advertisement photos and keep in my shelf. Most of my toys include car and bikes mostly. When I used to go to school and come back home I used to sit at the window seat just to see the luxury cars. Nowadays I am not that much interested in Audi brand that much because, now I know more other brands. But I have still kept my hotwheels toy cars safely because it reminds me of my childhood. To be honest I still take a look at the current hotwheels collection at shopping stores and malls. I still find it very fascinating.
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Proper nouns are always capitalized
Since my childhood, I've been fond of cars.
Since childhood, I've been fond of cars- 'I have been' expresses a continous action originating in the past using the verb 'to be'. verbs such as this show actions that happened in the past and continue to present time
My family says that I used to find the car advertisements in newspapers to see the cars.
Perfect. good job!
My favourite car brand in childhood was the Audi.
'when I was a child' or 'as a child' is more grammatically correct, was 'the' Audi. Putting a definite article highlights Audi it as a particular car brand.
I used to cut the Audi advertisement photos and keep them in my shelf.
Reflex verbs helps us to indicate that things or peple are being -re-refferred to within a given sentence.
Most of my toys include cars and bikes mostly.
Repetition of the same word. Add 's' to car to show plural form
When I used to go to school and come back home, I used towould sit at the window seat just to see the luxury cars.
"would' is a better form of the words "used to" and help to avoid repetition
Nowadays I am not that muchas interested in Audi brand that much because, now I know more about other brands or now I am aware of other brands.
Avoid word repetition and we use 'know about' if we do not have non-personal knowledge and "know' when we have full knowledge of something or someone
But I have still kept my hotwheels toy cars safely because ithey reminds me of my childhood.
We use a reflexive pronoun to indicate you are referring to the 'toys'.
To be honest, I still take a look at the current hHotw Wheels collection at shopping stores and malls.
Good job. Add a comma to express a thoughtful pause
I still find it very fascinating.
Excellent!
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Great job. Keep practising every day, and your English writing will improve significantly . All the best
SEver since my childhood, I've been fond of cars.
My family says that I used to find thelook for car advertisements in newspapers to see the cars.
Look for / search = the act of trying to find something
My favourite car brand in my childhood was Audi.
Just for information, we often use the word "make" specifically for car manufacturers. An alternative for your sentence would be, "My favourite make of car during my childhood was Audi." We would use "model" for the specific car from that manufacturer. E.g., "the make and model of my car is a Volkswagen Polo."
I used to cut out the Audi advertisement photos and keep them in my shelf.
To physically remove it = cut out
Most of my toys included cars and bikes mostly.
No need to use the word "most" twice
When I used to go to school and come back home, I used to sit atin the window seat just(of the bus/car) just to be able to see the luxury cars.
Nowadays, I am not that much interested in Audi brand that much because, now I know morea lot of other brands.
No need to repeat "much" twice
But I have still kept my hHotw Wheels toy cars safely because ithey reminds me of my childhood.
Hot Wheels is a name, so is capitalized
To be honest, I still take a look at the current hHotw Wheels collections at shopping stores and malls.
I still find ithem very fascinating/interesting.
Just a comment, "fascinating" is VERY strong. If that's what you meant, great, but otherwise just "interesting" is more appropriate to say that you still enjoy looking at them.
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Great job
My favourite car.
Since my childhood, I've been fond of cars.
My family says that I used to find the car advertisements in newspapers to see the cars.
My favourite car brand in my childhood was Audi.
I used to cut out the Audi advertisement photos and keep ithem on my shelf.
Most of my toys includwere cars and bikes mostly.
When I used to go to school and come back home I used towould come back home from school, I would sit at the window seat just to see the luxury cars.
Nowadays I am not that muchas interested in the Audi brand that much because, now, as I know more other brands.
But I have still kept my hotwheels toy cars safely because it reminds me of my childhood.
To be honest I still take a look at the current hotwheels collection at shopping stores and malls.
I still find it very fascinating.
My favourite car. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My favourite Proper nouns are always capitalized |
Since my childhood, I've fond of cars. Since my childhood, I've been fond of cars.
Since my childhood, I've been fond of cars. Since childhood, I've been fond of cars- 'I have been' expresses a continous action originating in the past using the verb 'to be'. verbs such as this show actions that happened in the past and continue to present time |
My family says that I used to find the car advertisements in newspapers to see the cars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My family says that I used to Look for / search = the act of trying to find something My family says that I used to find the car advertisements in newspapers to see the cars. Perfect. good job! |
My favourite car brand in childhood was Audi. My favourite car brand in my childhood was Audi. My favourite car brand in my childhood was Audi. Just for information, we often use the word "make" specifically for car manufacturers. An alternative for your sentence would be, "My favourite make of car during my childhood was Audi." We would use "model" for the specific car from that manufacturer. E.g., "the make and model of my car is a Volkswagen Polo." My favourite car brand in childhood was the Audi. 'when I was a child' or 'as a child' is more grammatically correct, was 'the' Audi. Putting a definite article highlights Audi it as a particular car brand. |
I used to cut the Audi advertisement photos and keep in my shelf. I used to cut out the Audi advertisement photos and keep I used to cut out the Audi advertisement photos and keep them in my shelf. To physically remove it = cut out I used to cut the Audi advertisement photos and keep them in my shelf. Reflex verbs helps us to indicate that things or peple are being -re-refferred to within a given sentence. |
Most of my toys include car and bikes mostly. Most of my toys Most of my toys included cars and bikes No need to use the word "most" twice Most of my toys include cars and bikes Repetition of the same word. Add 's' to car to show plural form |
When I used to go to school and come back home I used to sit at the window seat just to see the luxury cars. When I When I used to go to school and come back home, I used to sit When I used to go to school and come back home, I used "would' is a better form of the words "used to" and help to avoid repetition |
Nowadays I am not that much interested in Audi brand that much because, now I know more other brands. Now Nowadays, I am not No need to repeat "much" twice Nowadays I am not that Avoid word repetition and we use 'know about' if we do not have non-personal knowledge and "know' when we have full knowledge of something or someone |
But I have still kept my hotwheels toy cars safely because it reminds me of my childhood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But I have still kept my Hot Wheels is a name, so is capitalized But I have still kept my hotwheels toy cars safely because We use a reflexive pronoun to indicate you are referring to the 'toys'. |
To be honest I still take a look at the current hotwheels collection at shopping stores and malls. This sentence has been marked as perfect! To be honest, I still take a look at To be honest, I still take a look at the current Good job. Add a comma to express a thoughtful pause |
I still find it very fascinating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I still find Just a comment, "fascinating" is VERY strong. If that's what you meant, great, but otherwise just "interesting" is more appropriate to say that you still enjoy looking at them. I still find it very fascinating. Excellent! |
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