March 4, 2025
My Favorite Watch
My favorite watch is the Omnitrix from Ben 10 cartoon because this watch allows you to turn into ten kinds of different monsters.
My favorite watch is the Omnitrix from Ben 10 cartoon because this watch allows you to turn it into ten kinds of different monsters.
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March 5, 2025
Thank you :)
My Favorite Watch
My favorite watch is the Omnitrix from the Ben 10 cartoon because this watch allows you to turn into ten kinds of different monsters.
Either say “from the Ben 10 cartoon” or just “from Ben 10.” The second sounds more natural.
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March 4, 2025
Oops I just noticed this. Say “ten kinds of monsters” or “ten different monsters.” You dont need both kinds and different because they both imply the same thing.
March 4, 2025
I would say "because it allows you to turn into ten different kinds of monsters". "Different kinds" has a more natural adjective order than "kinds of different", even though both are correct. "It" also sounds more natural because you introduced the watch earlier in the sentence. Both of these are nitpicks though, the sentence is grammatically correct.
March 5, 2025
Thank you :)
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My favorite watch is the Omnitrix from Ben 10 cartoon because this watch allows you to turn into ten kinds of different monsters. My favorite watch is the Omnitrix from the Ben 10 cartoon because this watch allows you to turn into ten kinds of different monsters. Either say “from the Ben 10 cartoon” or just “from Ben 10.” The second sounds more natural. My favorite watch is the Omnitrix from Ben 10 cartoon because this watch allows you to turn it into ten kinds of different monsters. Well done. Needed “it” |
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