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jopa

May 16, 2022

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My Favorite thing to eat for breakfast

I love to eat fruits as breakfast which is very light and easily digestable
But the challenge is which type of fruits to be chosen for myself am talking
I have some issues with dental, so I can not eat too much citric fruits
However I love them though

Somehow I do not prefer to have on daily basis an apple, though the saying goes an apple keeps the doctor away

Also for me my choice of fruits where am based
In Africa mangoes, bananes , papayas, Avacados are so fresh and organic

Corrections

My Ffavorite thing to eat for breakfast

Either you capitalize all the nouns or just the first word, but never only the first 2 words.

I love to eat fruits asfor breakfast which issince they are very light and easilyy to digestable.

But the challenge is whichchoosing what type of fruits to be chosen for myself am talkingI should eat.

Not sure what "am talking" was suppose to mean, and since it didn't really fit with the rest of the sentence, I removed it.

I have some issues with dentaldental issues, so I can not eat too muchany citric fruits.

However, I love them though.

Somehow I do not prefer to haveFor some reason, I do not like eating apples on a daily basis an apple,even though the saying goes a, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away."

Also for me, my choice ofin fruits where am basedis based on where I live.

In Africa, mangoes, bananes as, papayas, Avaand avocados are sovery fresh and organic.

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Try not to forget to put periods at the end of your sentences.

My Favorite thing to eat for breakfast


My Ffavorite thing to eat for breakfast

Either you capitalize all the nouns or just the first word, but never only the first 2 words.

I love to eat fruits as breakfast which is very light and easily digestable


I love to eat fruits asfor breakfast which issince they are very light and easilyy to digestable.

But the challenge is which type of fruits to be chosen for myself am talking


But the challenge is whichchoosing what type of fruits to be chosen for myself am talkingI should eat.

Not sure what "am talking" was suppose to mean, and since it didn't really fit with the rest of the sentence, I removed it.

I have some issues with dental, so I can not eat too much citric fruits


I have some issues with dentaldental issues, so I can not eat too muchany citric fruits.

However I love them though


However, I love them though.

Somehow I do not prefer to have on daily basis an apple, though the saying goes an apple keeps the doctor away


Somehow I do not prefer to haveFor some reason, I do not like eating apples on a daily basis an apple,even though the saying goes a, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away."

Also for me my choice of fruits where am based


Also for me, my choice ofin fruits where am basedis based on where I live.

In Africa mangoes, bananes , papayas, Avacados are so fresh and organic


In Africa, mangoes, bananes as, papayas, Avaand avocados are sovery fresh and organic.

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