Jan. 7, 2020
My favorite song
I listened to this song so many times last year.
God Only Knows [Timbaland Remix]
by for KING & COUNTRY + Echosmith
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=HlvnYkBbZXc
I was really moved and couldn’t stop my tears.
I translated the lyrics to Japanese.
I sometimes enjoy translating English sentences or lyrics :)
I am not a Christian, but I believe in God and he’s always looking out for you.
There’s a similar saying in Japan, “The sun is always watching you whenever you do something good or bad.”
(Corrected on Jan. 9th)
私は去年この歌を何度も聴きました。
とても感動し、涙を止めることができませんでした。
私はこの歌詞を日本語に訳しました。
時々、英語の歌詞や文章を翻訳して楽しんでいます :)
私はキリスト教信者ではありませんが、神様は存在し、私たちをいつも見ていると信じています。
日本語にも似たようなことわざがあります。「お天道様(てんとさま＝太陽)が見ているよ。」
My favorite song
I listened to this song so many times last year.
God Only Knows [Timbaland Remix] by for KING & COUNTRY + Echosmith https://m.
youtube.
com/watch?
v=HlvnYkBbZXcI was really moved and cthe tears wouldn’'t stop the tears.coming.
Or you can say, "I couldn't stop crying".
I am not a Christian, but I believe there’s is a God and he’s always looking atwatching you.
There’s also a nice saying in Japan, “There’ sun is always the sun looking at you whenever you do something good andor bad.” I translated its lyrics to Japanese too.I I also sometimes enjoy translating English sentences or lyrics :)
When you say, "I translated its lyrics to Japanese too." Are you talking about the song? If so, I would have put that sentence right after the song link, or before. Just so it would make more sense and stay on the topic.
Feedback
Overall, good job! :)
Jan. 7, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Yes, I meant I translated that favorite song- God only knows.😅 I should have put the sentence after the link!
My favorite song
I listened to this song so many times last year.
v=HlvnYkBbZXcI was really moved and couldn’t stop themy tears.
I am not a Christian, but I believe there’s is a God and he’s always looking atout for you.
Or you could say "I believe in God". "looking at you" means he is literally staring at you all the time. That reads as creepy rather than loving. A native English speaker would normally say "he's always looking out for you", meaning he is watching over you in a positive way.
There’s also a nice similar saying in Japan, “There’s always the sun looking at you whenever you do something good andor bad.”I translated itsthe lyrics to Japanese too.I sometimes enjoy translating English sentences or lyrics :)
Jan. 7, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
I learned the phrase “he’s looking out for you”.😊
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v=HlvnYkBbZXcI was really moved and couldn’t stop my tears. |
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I translated the lyrics to Japanese. |
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I sometimes enjoy translating English sentences or lyrics :)I am not a Christian, but I believe in God and he’s always looking out for you. |
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There’s a similar saying in Japan, “The sun is watching you whenever you do something good or bad.”(Corrected 9th, Jan) |
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There’s a similar saying in Japan, “The sun is always watching you whenever you do something good or bad.”(Corrected 9th, Jan) |
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There’s a similar saying in Japan, “The sun is always watching you whenever you do something good or bad.”(Corrected on Jan. 9th) |
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