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My favorite show - Breaking Bad

My favorite tv show is Breaking Bad and although action is not my cup of tea, because they're generally bland, this one is, for me, one of the best things I've ever seen!
The main story is about a chemistry teacher, Walter White, that discovers he has cancer and its treatment has an astronomical price. In order to provide a good future for his family and to postpone his death, he starts to cook meth with his ancient student, Jesse Pinkman.
The reason why it became my favorite show is the genius way of Walter's thinking! The situations that he and his partner get through seems to me impossible to solve or to crack, but they always know a way to come out winning or at least alive.
I can't help having only one best-loved characters, but if I can select only two of them, that would be Jesse and Gustavo Fring. Jesse has a complicated life story and his toxic relationship with Walter is truly interesting, it shows that he sees his teacher as a father figure and since I'm a sucker for psychology, I enjoy seeing the development and the decay of their bond. About the character actedd by Giancarlo Esposito, I love how the actor played the role so skillfully, he absorbed Fring's traits and I'd definitely watch another movie or show cast by him.
Wrapping it up, I think of Breaking Bad as a must-watch masterpiece and I'd recommend it to anyone!

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My favorite show - Breaking Bad

My favorite tvTV show is Breaking Bad and although action is not my cup of tea, because they're generally bland, this one is, for me, one of the best things I've ever seen!

The main story is about a chemistry teacher, Walter White, thatwho discovers that he has cancer and that its treatment has an astronomical price.

In order to provide a good futuresecure financial security for his family and to postpone his death, he starts to cook meth with his ancientone of his old students, Jesse Pinkman.

“Secure” is a better choice of word, because you are implying he intends to do this in the future.

The reason why it became my favorite show is the genius way of Walter's thinking!

The situations that he and his partner get through seems to me impossible to solve or to crack, but they always know a way to come out winning or at least alive.

Since you used “situations”, it needs to be paired with “seem”. If you are talking about one “situation”, then “seems” would be correct.

I can't hdefinitelpy having only one best-lovede more than one favorite characters, b. But if I can select only two of them, thatey would be Jesse and Gustavo Fring.

Jesse has a complicated life story and his toxic relationship with Walter is truly interesting, it shows that he sees his teacher as a father figure and since I'm a sucker for psychology, I enjoy seeing the development and the decay of their bond.

About the character actedportrayed by Giancarlo Esposito, I love how the actor played the role so skillfully, he absorbed Fring's traits and I'd definitely watch another one of his movie or show cast by him.

“Cast by him” makes it look as though he would be the director, and not the actor. Actors get cast, they don’t cast others.

Wrapping it up, I think of Breaking Bad as a must-watch masterpiece and I'd recommend it to anyone!

My favorite show - Breaking Bad

My favorite tv show is Breaking Bad and although action is nomovies aren't my cup of tea, because they're generally bland, this one is, for me, one of the best things I've ever seen!

If you want to use 'they're' then you need to use the plural - 'action movies'

The main story is about a chemistry teacher, Walter White, that discovers he has cancer and itsthe treatment has an astronomical price.

Very good! Just a small change to make it more natural.

In order to provide a good future for his family and to postproloneg his deathlife, he starts to cook meth with his ancientformer student, Jesse Pinkman.

Instead of 'postpone his death', use 'prolong his life'. It is more natural!

The reason why it became my favorite show is the genius way of Walter's thinking!

The situations that he and his partner get through seems to me impossible to solve or to crack, but they always know a way to come out winning or at least alive.

I can't help having only one best-loved characterschoose only one character I like the most, but if I canhad to select only two of them, that would be Jesse and Gustavo Fring.

Jesse has a complicated life story and his toxic relationship with Walter is truly interesting, it shows that he sees his teacher as a father figure and since I'm a sucker for psychology, I enjoy seeing the development and the decay of their bond.

About the character actedd by Giancarlo Esposito, I love how the actor played the role so skillfully, he absorbed Fring's traits and I'd definitely watch another movie or show that cast bys him.

Wrapping it up, I think of Breaking Bad as a must-watch masterpiece and I'd recommend it to anyone!

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Good work! Breaking Bad is one of my favourite shows too. I think Jesse is my favourite character.

My favorite show - Breaking Bad


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My favorite tv show is Breaking Bad and although action is not my cup of tea, because they're generally bland, this one is, for me, one of the best things I've ever seen!


My favorite tv show is Breaking Bad and although action is nomovies aren't my cup of tea, because they're generally bland, this one is, for me, one of the best things I've ever seen!

If you want to use 'they're' then you need to use the plural - 'action movies'

My favorite tvTV show is Breaking Bad and although action is not my cup of tea, because they're generally bland, this one is, for me, one of the best things I've ever seen!

The main story is about a chemistry teacher, Walter White, that discovers he has cancer and its treatment has an astronomical price.


The main story is about a chemistry teacher, Walter White, that discovers he has cancer and itsthe treatment has an astronomical price.

Very good! Just a small change to make it more natural.

The main story is about a chemistry teacher, Walter White, thatwho discovers that he has cancer and that its treatment has an astronomical price.

In order to provide a good future for his family and to postpone his death, he starts to cook meth with his ancient student, Jesse Pinkman.


In order to provide a good future for his family and to postproloneg his deathlife, he starts to cook meth with his ancientformer student, Jesse Pinkman.

Instead of 'postpone his death', use 'prolong his life'. It is more natural!

In order to provide a good futuresecure financial security for his family and to postpone his death, he starts to cook meth with his ancientone of his old students, Jesse Pinkman.

“Secure” is a better choice of word, because you are implying he intends to do this in the future.

The reason why it became my favorite show is the genius way of Walter's thinking!


The reason why it became my favorite show is the genius way of Walter's thinking!

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The situations that he and his partner get through seems to me impossible to solve or to crack, but they always know a way to come out winning or at least alive.


The situations that he and his partner get through seems to me impossible to solve or to crack, but they always know a way to come out winning or at least alive.

The situations that he and his partner get through seems to me impossible to solve or to crack, but they always know a way to come out winning or at least alive.

Since you used “situations”, it needs to be paired with “seem”. If you are talking about one “situation”, then “seems” would be correct.

I can't help having only one best-loved characters, but if I can select only two of them, that would be Jesse and Gustavo Fring.


I can't help having only one best-loved characterschoose only one character I like the most, but if I canhad to select only two of them, that would be Jesse and Gustavo Fring.

I can't hdefinitelpy having only one best-lovede more than one favorite characters, b. But if I can select only two of them, thatey would be Jesse and Gustavo Fring.

Jesse has a complicated life story and his toxic relationship with Walter is truly interesting, it shows that he sees his teacher as a father figure and since I'm a sucker for psychology, I enjoy seeing the development and the decay of their bond.


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About the character actedd by Giancarlo Esposito, I love how the actor played the role so skillfully, he absorbed Fring's traits and I'd definitely watch another movie or show cast by him.


About the character actedd by Giancarlo Esposito, I love how the actor played the role so skillfully, he absorbed Fring's traits and I'd definitely watch another movie or show that cast bys him.

About the character actedportrayed by Giancarlo Esposito, I love how the actor played the role so skillfully, he absorbed Fring's traits and I'd definitely watch another one of his movie or show cast by him.

“Cast by him” makes it look as though he would be the director, and not the actor. Actors get cast, they don’t cast others.

Wrapping it up, I think of Breaking Bad as a must-watch masterpiece and I'd recommend it to anyone!


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