Sept. 15, 2024
My favorite season is summer
So why summer is my favorite season ? There are differents reasons of course .
First of all ,the weather in summer is so good and hot for the majority of the time .
That allow me to hang out with some friends and hiking outside because when it s raining hiking is sucks.
Then when it's summer the days are longer than in winter so we have more time for everything like swimming in the pool for example.
By the way it's also that , I love during summer , you can go to the pool then make barbecue and have a party with some friends.
Next, I love this season because it's summer holliday so it's ideal to go to the beach or visit a new country.
Have a good day :)
Pourquoi l'été est-il ma saison préférée ? Il y a bien sûr plusieurs raisons.
Tout d'abord, le temps en été est généralement agréable et chaud la plupart du temps.
Cela me permet de sortir avec des amis et de faire des randonnées, parce que quand il pleut, randonner, c'est vraiment nul.
Ensuite, en été, les journées sont plus longues qu'en hiver, donc on a plus de temps pour tout, comme par exemple nager dans la piscine.
D'ailleurs, c'est aussi ça que j'aime en été : tu peux aller à la piscine, faire un barbecue et organiser une soirée avec des amis.
Enfin, j'adore cette saison parce que c'est les vacances d'été, donc c'est l'idéal pour aller à la plage ou visiter un nouveau pays.
Passe une bonne journée
My favorite season is summer
So why summer is my favorite season ?
Unlike in French there is no space before the exclamation mark.
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Stylistically it’s better to have the of course at the start of the sentence.
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No space before the comma.
Next, I love this season because it's summer hollidays so it's ideal to go to the beach or visit a new country.
Have a good day :)
So, why is summer is my favorite season ?
There are differents reasons of course .
First of all , the weather during summer is so goodnice and hotwarm for the majority of the time .
I changed the words "good" and "hot" to "nice" and "warm", because "good" is not usually used to describe weather, and "hot" usually has a negative meaning when describing weather.
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NextLastly, I love this season because it'sof the summer hollidays, so it's an ideal time to go to the beach or visit a new country.
Have a good day :)
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Good job! :)
Sept. 16, 2024
thank you !!!
So why summer is my favorite season ?
So, why is summer my favourite season?
There are differents reasons for this, of course .
Be careful about the space between the full stop!
First of all ,the weather in summer is so good and hot for the majority of the time .
Thatis allows me to hang out with some friends and go hiking outside because w. When it s rainings, hiking is sucks.
Try to use more full stops and punctiation to break up the sentence!
Then, when it's summer the days are longer than inunlike winter so w. We have more time for everything, like swimming in the pool for example.
By the way it's also that Also, I love during summer , ,you can go to the pool then makeand have a barbecue and have a party with some friends.
In English, you don't "make" a barbecue - you "have" one.
Next, I love this season because it'sof the summer holliday so it. I's ideal to go to the beach or visit a new country.
Feedback
Good job! I feel like you had a lot of varied vocabulary. Please try to use more punctuation to shorten your sentances a bit, as you use a lot of connectives (like "and" "also") which makes it difficult to read!
I've recently moved to Japan and while a beautiful country, it's so humid here! I would love a more relaxing summer.
Sept. 15, 2024
Thank you : )
I take note .
Oh Japan it's cool !!!
If I can ask you what is your country of origin ?
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