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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 13, 2021

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My Favorite Restaurant

There are many restaurants near my home because there is a big university.

For a satisfying taste of students, many restaurants serve tasty and cheap foods.

For example, there are many street foods such as Hotteok (Honey-filled Korean Pancake), tteokbokki (Stir-fried Rice Cake) and Gimbap (Rice ball).

Plus, there are fancy restaurants for couples who want to eat at an intimate restaurant.

But, it is not easy to go the restaurants because of the resrictive rules by COVID-19.

Instead, we use the food delivery services to eat the foods.

I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.

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My Favorite Restaurant

There are many restaurants near my home because there is a big university.

For a satisfying taste ofTo appeal to students, many restaurants serve tasty and cheap foods.

For example, there are many street foods such as Hhotteok (Hhoney-filled Korean Ppancakes), tteokbokki (Sstir-fried Rrice Ccakes) and Ggimbap (Rrice balls).

Plus, there are fancy restaurants for couples who want to eat at an intimate restaurant.

But, it is not easy to go to the restaurants because of the restrictive rules bydue to COVID-19.

In formal English, you should not start a sentence with "but," but it is fine in informal/conversational English. If you want a more formal option, you can say:
However, it is not easy to go to the restaurants because of the restrictive rules due to COVID-19.

Instead, we use the food delivery services to eat theget foods.

I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.

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Oct. 14, 2021

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My Favorite Restaurant


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There are many restaurants near my home because there is a big university.


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For a satisfying taste of students, many restaurants serve tasty and cheap foods.


For a satisfying taste ofTo appeal to students, many restaurants serve tasty and cheap foods.

For example, there are many street foods such as Hotteok (Honey-filled Korean Pancake), tteokbokki (Stir-fried Rice Cake) and Gimbap (Rice ball).


For example, there are many street foods such as Hhotteok (Hhoney-filled Korean Ppancakes), tteokbokki (Sstir-fried Rrice Ccakes) and Ggimbap (Rrice balls).

Plus, there are fancy restaurants for couples who want to eat at an intimate restaurant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But, it is not easy to go the restaurants because of the resrictive rules by COVID-19.


But, it is not easy to go to the restaurants because of the restrictive rules bydue to COVID-19.

In formal English, you should not start a sentence with "but," but it is fine in informal/conversational English. If you want a more formal option, you can say: However, it is not easy to go to the restaurants because of the restrictive rules due to COVID-19.

Instead, we use the food delivery services to eat the foods.


Instead, we use the food delivery services to eat theget foods.

I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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