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Speaking onf favorite music, I can't avoid mentioning Radiohead.

I love their music, and how they playing with the sound ofin their albums, moving from rock to electronic.

CA couple years ago I started to listen to a band called Tortoise.

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It's first song, called “DJed”, is so awesome.

It's 20 minutes long, and haves several parts, that crossingintersect one in another.

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I had to guess a bit about your meaning here. Interpreting it differently, I could have also written, “then it picks up, going in a steady rhythm.” These sound similar, but the implication is different.

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That/which is sometimes ambiguous, but here, since you’ve set it off with a comma, using “that” makes the sentence sound incomplete. Here is some additional context: https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/when-to-use-that-and-which

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I haven't listened to their first albums, but I believe, they started as a garage rock band.

They enhanced their music, bringing psychedelic, jazz, and progressive rock elements into it , which let their sound become so unique and superb, among the modern rock bands.

Conjunctions can be omitted for effect sometimes, if used prudently, but that generally only occurs when there is some sort of parallel structure going on and when the items are somehow separate from the rest of the sentence.

In their love tof experimenting with musical genres they even created a album in the metal genre, withhere their unique flavour of psychedelic vibrates mixeds with rough metal guitar riffs.

When discussing art or texts, the present tense is generally used unless you’re writing in reference to a future point in time.

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I would spokeeak about music all day, if I could, and if I knew enough words in English to express my feelings.

Speaking on favorite music, I can'thave to mention Radiohead.

If you say "can't mention" that implies you don't like their music/won't talk about them.

I love their music, and how they playing with the sound of their albums, moving from rock to electronic.

CA couple years ago I started to listen to a band called Tortoise.

It'sTheir first song, called DJed, is so awesome.

It's 20 minutes long, and haves several parts, that crossing between one inand another.

Commas aren't necessary; it fits as one full sentence.

SThe song startings meditative, and then it takes picks up its pace and goes inturns into a steady rhythm, that suddenly stops and continues with a breathtaking polyphonic symphony of sounds.

After that album, I've listened to all their other albums, thatand all of them vary in their sound and complexity of songs.

And tThe last band, that I want to talk about is King Gizzard and The Lizard Wizard.

They are quirte a new band, that started making their music fromin 2010.

I haven't listened to their first albums, but I believe, they started as a garage rock band.

They enhanced their music, bringing psychedelic, jazz, and progressive rock elements into it , which let their sound become so unique and superb, among the modern rock bands.

I think ithat's enough.

I would spokeeak about music all day, if I could, and if I knew enough words in English to express my feelings.

The addition of "if I" makes the sentence sound smoother/more natural.