June 22, 2020
MY FAVORITE MUSIC
I love EDM(electric dance music). I love so much this kind of music, so I started DJ. I tell you why I love it because it excites me whenever I want to be more excited. My part time job is delivering pizza. When the day is rainy, I feel under the weather because I'm drenched. In such a case, I listen to EDM. It energizes me.
I love so much this kindtype of music, so much that I started to DJ.
I can tell you why I love it: it's because it excites me whenever I want to be more excited.
bit confused on what you mean by "excites me whenever I want to be more excited"
When the day is rainy, I feel under the weather because I'm drenched.
Not sure what you really mean here
In such a case, I listen to EDM.
Or: "Whenever I don't feel so good, I listen to EDM"
"In such a case" is a bit too formal
June 27, 2020
Thank u for correcting my journal!
I love so much this kind of music, so much I started to DJ.
I tell you why I love it because it excites me whenever I want to be more excited.
When the day is rainy, I feel under the weather because I'm drenchedit rains, and I'm feeling down, I like to listen to EDM.
In such a case, I listen to EDM.
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June 27, 2020
ご指摘いただきありがとうございます！！
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MY FAVORITE MUSIC |
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I love EDM(electric dance music). |
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I love so much this kind of music, so I started DJ. I love I love |
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I tell you why I love it because it excites me whenever I want to be more excited.
I can tell you why I love it: it's because it excites me whenever I want to be more excited. bit confused on what you mean by "excites me whenever I want to be more excited" |
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My part time job is delivering pizza. |
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When the day is rainy, I feel under the weather because I'm drenched. When When the day is rainy, I feel under the weather because I'm drenched. Not sure what you really mean here |
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In such a case, I listen to EDM.
In such a case, I listen to EDM. Or: "Whenever I don't feel so good, I listen to EDM" "In such a case" is a bit too formal |
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It energizes me. |
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