My favorite movie is Harry Potter, t. The movie is about an orphan boy, h. His parents died in a confrontation with a bad sorcerer and Harry Potterhe tries to avenge his parents in all movie but he had many problems for that objectivethem throughout the series. He faces many challenges, but later he finds two friend thats who help him and together got to beat the all bad wizards.

- Use pronouns for previously established nouns. "Harry Potter" becomes "he", for example.
- "in all movie" -> "throughout the series" (If you are talking about the Harry Potter movies as a whole)
- "he had many problems for that objective" -> "He faces many challenges" (This is one way to rephrase it)
- "the all wizards" -> "the bad wizards" (I think this is what you mean)

My favorite part is when the friend of Harry Potter's friend kisses Hermione b. But to be honest with you, I think that the books are the best because Despite are better. Despite there being eight movies it, the books are still short.

"but to be honest with you I think that the book are the best because Despite are eight movies it are still short."

One way to simplify this idea is to separate it into two sentences. The first sentence introduces your opinion, and the second gives the reason for the opinion.

My favorite movie is Harry Potter, t. The movie is about an orphan boy,. hHis parents died in a confrontation with a bad sorcerer, and Harry Potter tries to avenge his parents in all movie but hs. He hads many problems for that objective, but later he finds two friends that help him, and together got tothey beat the all wizards.

Es muy larga y entonces es difícil corregirla :-) pero espero que te ayude.

My favorite part is when the friend of Harry Potter kisses Hermione but t. To be honest with you, I think that the book are the bestbetter because Despiteven though there are eight movies ithey are still too short.