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Feb. 21, 2023

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text 3 - My Favorite holiday

I'll to talk for my favorite holiday that is Christmas. I don't like the day 25 but a Christmas eve. Many familys in my city and the world decorete your house for the comemoration and I like the many movies to the theme are released. I like anything about Christmas including books like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.

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tText 3 -: My Favorite hHoliday

I'll to talk forabout my favorite holiday that, which is Christmas.

I don't like the day 25Christmas Day, but a Christmas eEve.

Many familyies in my city, ands well as the rest of the world, decorete youate their houses for the comemorationholiday and I like the many movies abouto the theme that are released.

I like aneverything about Christmas, including books like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.

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Great job

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text 3 - My Favorite holiday

I'll to talk forabout my favorite holiday thatwhich is Christmas.

I don't like the day 25 but a Christmas eve.

not sure what you are trying to say here?

Many familyies in my city and the world decorete youate their houses for the commemoration and. I like the many movies to the theme are releashat are Christmas-themed.

I removed the 'and' because the two clauses are of different subjects

I like anything aboutto do with Christmas, including books like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.

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good work! some of your sentences lack clarity because of article usage, so I would suggest working on that. Otherwise, keep working hard :)

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camila5fea

Feb. 22, 2023

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Thank you!!

My Favorite holiday


I'll to talk for my favorite holiday that is Christmas.


I'll to talk forabout my favorite holiday thatwhich is Christmas.

I'll to talk forabout my favorite holiday that, which is Christmas.

I don't like the day 25 but a Christmas eve.


I don't like the day 25 but a Christmas eve.

not sure what you are trying to say here?

I don't like the day 25Christmas Day, but a Christmas eEve.

Many familys in my city and the world decorete your house for the comemoration and I like the many movies to the theme are released.


Many familyies in my city and the world decorete youate their houses for the commemoration and. I like the many movies to the theme are releashat are Christmas-themed.

I removed the 'and' because the two clauses are of different subjects

Many familyies in my city, ands well as the rest of the world, decorete youate their houses for the comemorationholiday and I like the many movies abouto the theme that are released.

I like anything about Christmas including books like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.


I like anything aboutto do with Christmas, including books like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.

I like aneverything about Christmas, including books like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.

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