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mimi_fr_04

July 14, 2025

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My favorite food

My favorite food is a traditional one ,it is an algerian one,also,it's a spicy food
I realy love it ,it 's so delicious.

Corrections

My favorite food is a traditional one; ,it is an aAlgerian one,also,it's a spicy food ¶
dish. It’s spicy, and I really love it ,it 'because it’s so delicious.

Strengths:

Good clarity: you communicated your point clearly; you’re talking about your favorite food and why you love it.

Personal tone: expressing love for the dish adds warmth.

Suggestions for improvement:

"Algerian" should always be capitalized (it’s a proper adjective).

"Dish" sounds a bit more natural than repeating "food" twice in the same sentence.

Combine short sentences smoothly for better flow: rather than three simple sentences, it can become two polished ones.

Remove unnecessary commas (e.g., no comma before “also” and "it's").

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mimi_fr_04

July 14, 2025

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I'm really happy for your correction
Thank you so much

My favorite food

My favorite food is a traditional one ,it is an algerian one,also,it's a spicy food and it is also spicy.
I real
ly love it ,it 's so delicious.

It was really great, I just changed some things so it comes out more natural.

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mimi_fr_04

July 14, 2025

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Thank you again Mrs Julia.

My favorite food


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My favorite food is a traditional one ,it is an algerian one,also,it's a spicy food I realy love it ,it 's so delicious.


My favorite food is a traditional one ,it is an algerian one,also,it's a spicy food and it is also spicy.
I real
ly love it ,it 's so delicious.

It was really great, I just changed some things so it comes out more natural.

My favorite food is a traditional one; ,it is an aAlgerian one,also,it's a spicy food ¶
dish. It’s spicy, and I really love it ,it 'because it’s so delicious.

Strengths: Good clarity: you communicated your point clearly; you’re talking about your favorite food and why you love it. Personal tone: expressing love for the dish adds warmth. Suggestions for improvement: "Algerian" should always be capitalized (it’s a proper adjective). "Dish" sounds a bit more natural than repeating "food" twice in the same sentence. Combine short sentences smoothly for better flow: rather than three simple sentences, it can become two polished ones. Remove unnecessary commas (e.g., no comma before “also” and "it's").

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