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llimas

March 2, 2025

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My Favorite Drink To Warm Up My Body On A Cold or Rainy Day

I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.
The hot chocolate taste better, but I think that bone broth is more healthy, so I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.

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My Favorite Drink Tto Warm Up My Body Oon Aa Cold or Rainy Day

I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.

The hot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthyier, so I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.

It is a bit repetitive to use "bone broth" twice in the same sentence, so I shortened the first instance of the phrase to reduce the repetition.

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llimas

March 3, 2025

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Thank you :)

My Favorite Drink To Warm Up My Body On A Cold or Rainy Day

I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.

The h Hot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthyier, so I'm prefer to drinking it more bone brothoften than hot chocolate.

I added often because it is more natural phrasing for frequency

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llimas

March 3, 2025

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Thank you :)

I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.

The hot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthyier, so I'mve been drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.

I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.

The hHot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthy,ier so I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.ve decided to drink that.

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sara_77

March 2, 2025

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"I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate" is grammatically correct, it's just too repetitive. Using a new verb and a pronoun (that) helps make the sentence seem more professional.

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llimas

March 3, 2025

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Thank you :)

My Favorite Drink To Warm Up My Body On A Cold or Rainy Day


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My Favorite Drink Tto Warm Up My Body Oon Aa Cold or Rainy Day

I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.


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I like to drink hot chocolate or bone broth on cold days.

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The hot chocolate taste better, but I think that bone broth is more healthy, so I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.


The hHot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthy,ier so I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.ve decided to drink that.

The hot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthyier, so I'mve been drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.

The h Hot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthyier, so I'm prefer to drinking it more bone brothoften than hot chocolate.

I added often because it is more natural phrasing for frequency

The hot chocolate tastes better, but I think that bone broth is more healthyier, so I'm drinking more bone broth than hot chocolate.

It is a bit repetitive to use "bone broth" twice in the same sentence, so I shortened the first instance of the phrase to reduce the repetition.

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