April 4, 2020
My Favorite Dish
My mother was the best cook in the family.
Japanese style hamburger steak was my favorite dish.
First, she chopped up onions. Then she mixed it with meat and tofu together.
She put in a tablespoon of miso to make it a little rich.
She also made a sauce after them grilled.
She added some orange juice to make it fruity.
The orange juice was her secret ingredient :)
私の母は家族の中で1番料理が上手でした。
私の好きな食べ物は日本風のハンバーグです。
最初に、玉ねぎを刻み、肉と豆腐と一緒にこねます。
また、味に深みをだすために、味噌を加えます。
それを焼いた後に、ソースを作ります。
フルーティーにするため、オレンジジュースを加えます。
オレンジジュースは母の隠し味です。
My Favorite Dish
My mother was the best cook in the family.
Japanese style hamburger steak was my favorite dish.
She added some orange juice to make it taste fruity.
The orange juice was her secret ingredient :)
My Favorite Dish
My mother was the best cook in the family.
Japanese style hamburger steak was my favorite dish.
First, she chopped up onions, then mixed it with meat and tofu.
This sentence and the next can be separated by a comma, no need for a full stop.
Then she mixed it with meat and tofu together.
Since the previous sentence and this one are connected, no need to repeat 'she' as we know it's already about her.
She'd put in a tablespoon of miso to make it a little rich.
Since this is past tense, you would say "she would".
'She'd' is the informal way of saying it.
She also made a sauce after them grilledgrilling them.
She'd also added some orange juice to make it fruity.
The orange juice was her secret ingredient :)
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Wonderful! That sounds lovely, I'm sure she's an amazing cook. Good job.
April 5, 2020
Thank you for letting me know! :)
My Favorite Dish
My mother was the best cook in the family.
Japanese style hamburger steak was my favorite dish.
First, she chopped up onions.
Then she mixed it with meat and tofu together.
"together" isn't needed since it's already implied by "mixed".
She put in a tablespoon of miso to make it a little rich.
She also made a sauce after them grilledgrilling the hamburger steak.
She added some orange juice to make it fruity.
The orange juice was her secret ingredient :)
April 4, 2020
Thank you for correcting me!!
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Then she mixed it with meat and tofu together. Then she mixed it with meat and tofu "together" isn't needed since it's already implied by "mixed". Then Since the previous sentence and this one are connected, no need to repeat 'she' as we know it's already about her. |
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