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kazu

Jan. 9, 2021

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My favorite band

Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite band. I really love Mr.children of Japanese musical artist. I think their’s band name is interesting because “Mr” and “children” mean opposite. Their vocal is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who I respect the most in the world. He has a great singing voice and meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their song get into them. Of course, I’m also one of them. Whenever I was struggling with something, they always helped me. You have no idea how much they mean to me. I can’t thank them enough and have too many things I want to tell about them, so I can not write everything. Please listen to their song when you have a moment.

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My favorite band

Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite band.

I really love Mr.c Children of, a Japanese musical artist.

I think their’s band name is interesting because “Mr” and “cChildren” meanare opposites.

Their vocalist is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who is the person I respect the most in the world.

This is an overly strong statement.

He has a great singing voice and his lyrics are meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their song get intohis band's songs enjoy them.

Of course, I’m also one of them.

Whenever I was struggling with something, they always helped me.

You have no idea how much they mean to me.

I can’t thank them enough and hav. There are too many things I want to tellsay about them, so I can not write for me to say everything.

"say" or "write"?

Please listen to their songs when you have a moment.

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kazu

Jan. 12, 2021

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Thank you so much!

My fFavorite bBand

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, etc., are capitalized.

Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite band.

I really love Mr.children of Japanese musical artistthe Japanese band “Mr. Children”.

I think their’s band name is interesting, because “Mr” and “children” meanhave opposite meanings.

Their vocal is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who is the person that I respect the most in the world.

He has a great singing voice and meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their songs get into thempulled in.

Of course, I’m also one of those peoplem.

When you said, “one of them”, it made me think that you were referring to the band.

Whenever I was struggling with something, they always helped me.

You have no idea of how much they mean to me.

I can’t thank them enough and I have toso many things I want to tell about them, sobut I can not write everythingthem all down.

“Can not” is often written/said as “can’t”.

Please listen to their songs when you have a moment.

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kazu

Jan. 12, 2021

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I appreciate it!

I really love Mr.children of Japanese musical artist.


I really love Mr.children of Japanese musical artistthe Japanese band “Mr. Children”.

I really love Mr.c Children of, a Japanese musical artist.

My favorite band


My fFavorite bBand

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, etc., are capitalized.

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Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite band.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think their’s band name is interesting because “Mr” and “children” mean opposite.


I think their’s band name is interesting, because “Mr” and “children” meanhave opposite meanings.

I think their’s band name is interesting because “Mr” and “cChildren” meanare opposites.

Their vocal is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who I respect the most in the world.


Their vocal is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who is the person that I respect the most in the world.

Their vocalist is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who is the person I respect the most in the world.

This is an overly strong statement.

He has a great singing voice and meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their song get into them.


He has a great singing voice and meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their songs get into thempulled in.

He has a great singing voice and his lyrics are meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their song get intohis band's songs enjoy them.

Of course, I’m also one of them.


Of course, I’m also one of those peoplem.

When you said, “one of them”, it made me think that you were referring to the band.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whenever I was struggling with something, they always helped me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You have no idea how much they mean to me.


You have no idea of how much they mean to me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can’t thank them enough and have too many things I want to tell about them, so I can not write everything.


I can’t thank them enough and I have toso many things I want to tell about them, sobut I can not write everythingthem all down.

“Can not” is often written/said as “can’t”.

I can’t thank them enough and hav. There are too many things I want to tellsay about them, so I can not write for me to say everything.

"say" or "write"?

Please listen to their song when you have a moment.


Please listen to their songs when you have a moment.

Please listen to their songs when you have a moment.

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