June 22, 2022
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is the eagle.
Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermals and train to improve their strength from an early age. Some eagles can fly up to 120 miles. And they also have a great vision to spot their preys. This makes the eagle some of the most powerful, prepared, and outstanding birds in the sky.
Through out the history, the eagle represented foresight, a higher perspective, strength, leadership, power, and loyalty. It was used by the Roman Empire as the their symbol, representing the empire strength, immortality, and courage. Unfortunately, it was also used by the Third Reich as one of their symbols, but it was a specific black eagle in pair with the Swastika, so it minimized the stigma attached to it.
Now-a-days, it's used as a symbol of liberty, confidence, vision, and courage. It's used as a symbol by the US and big companies such as American Airlines, Giorgio Armany, and Gulf Air.
Empires come and go, but the eagle stays as the symbol of bravery. That's why it's my favorite animal. Thank you for reading. Till next time.
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My favorite animal is the eagle.
Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermals air currents and train to improve their strength from an early age. Some eagles can fly up to 120 miles without stopping. And they also have great vision to spot their prey. This makes the eagle one of the most powerful, prepared, and outstanding birds in the sky.
Through-out history, the eagle represented foresight, vision, strength, leadership, power, and loyalty. It was used by the Roman Empire as the their symbol, representing the empire's strength, immortality, and courage. Unfortunately, it was also used by the Third Reich as one of their symbols, but it was in the form of a specific black eagle in pair with the Swastika. That specific form of the eagle is stigmatized, but not the eagle in general.
Now-a-days, it's used as a symbol of liberty, confidence, vision, and courage. It's used as a symbol by the US and by big companies such as American Airlines, Giorgio Armany, and Gulf Air.
Empires come and go, but the eagle remains a symbol of bravery. That's why it's my favorite animal. Thank you for reading. Till next time.
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is the eagle.
Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermal air currents
'Warm' and 'thermal' are adjectives, so you need a noun for them to modify.
and train to improve their strength from an early age.
Some eagles can fly up to 120 miles without stopping.
What you've written is correct, but just a bit of clarification would be nice. I don't know if this is factually correct...
And they also have a great vision to spot their preys.
'Prey' is singular and plural.
This makes the eagle somone of the most powerful, prepared, and outstanding birds in the sky.
Through out the history, the eagle has represented foresight, a higher perspectivevision, strength, leadership, power, and loyalty.
For parallelism purposes, I think 'a higher perspective' should be replaced with 'vision.'
It was used by the Roman Empire as the their symbol, representing the empire's strength, immortality, and courage.
Unfortunately, it was also used by the Third Reich as one of their symbols, but it was in the form of a specific black eagle in paitogether with the Swastika, so it minimized the stigma attached to it. That specific form of the eagle is stigmatized, but not the eagle in general.
What you've written is correct, but a couple of stylistic changes.
Now-a-days, it's used as a symbol of liberty, confidence, vision, and courage.
It's used as a symbol by the US and by big companies such as American Airlines, Giorgio Armanyi, and Gulf Air.
Empires come and go, but the eagle has staysed as the symbol of bravery.
Or more naturally, 'the eagle remains a symbol of bravery.'
That's why it's my favorite animal.
Thank you for reading.
Till next time.
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This was generally very good. Aside from some stylistic corrections, the point you're trying to make - that the eagle is a strong bird and symbolizes bravery - came through well.
June 22, 2022
Thank you for the corrections, man. I really appreciate it.
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Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermals Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermal air currents 'Warm' and 'thermal' are adjectives, so you need a noun for them to modify. |
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and train to improve their strength from an early age. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some eagles can fly up to 120 miles. Some eagles can fly up to 120 miles without stopping. What you've written is correct, but just a bit of clarification would be nice. I don't know if this is factually correct... |
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And they also have a great vision to spot their preys. And they also have 'Prey' is singular and plural. |
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This makes the eagle some of the most powerful, prepared, and outstanding birds in the sky. This makes the eagle |
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Through out the history, the eagle represented foresight, a higher perspective, strength, leadership, power, and loyalty. Through For parallelism purposes, I think 'a higher perspective' should be replaced with 'vision.' |
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It was used by the Roman Empire as the their symbol, representing the empire strength, immortality, and courage. It was used by the Roman Empire as the their symbol, representing the empire's strength, immortality, and courage. |
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Unfortunately, it was also used by the Third Reich as one of their symbols, but it was a specific black eagle in pair with the Swastika, so it minimized the stigma attached to it. Unfortunately, it was also used by the Third Reich as one of their symbols, but it was in the form of a specific black eagle What you've written is correct, but a couple of stylistic changes. |
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Now-a-days, it's used as a symbol of liberty, confidence, vision, and courage. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's used as a symbol by the US and big companies such as American Airlines, Giorgio Armany, and Gulf Air. It's used as a symbol by the US and by big companies such as American Airlines, Giorgio Arman |
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Empires come and go, but the eagle stays as the symbol of bravery. Empires come and go, but the eagle has stay Or more naturally, 'the eagle remains a symbol of bravery.' |
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That's why it's my favorite animal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you for reading. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Till next time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermals and train to improve their strength from an early age. |
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My favorite animal is the eagle. |
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Eagles can fly higher than any other birds, because they ride on warm thermals air currents and train to improve their strength from an early age. |
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Some eagles can fly up to 120 miles without stopping. |
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And they also have great vision to spot their prey. |
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This makes the eagle one of the most powerful, prepared, and outstanding birds in the sky. |
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Through-out history, the eagle represented foresight, vision, strength, leadership, power, and loyalty. |
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It was used by the Roman Empire as the their symbol, representing the empire's strength, immortality, and courage. |
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Unfortunately, it was also used by the Third Reich as one of their symbols, but it was in the form of a specific black eagle in pair with the Swastika. |
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That specific form of the eagle is stigmatized, but not the eagle in general. |
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Now-a-days, it's used as a symbol of liberty, confidence, vision, and courage. |
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It's used as a symbol by the US and by big companies such as American Airlines, Giorgio Armany, and Gulf Air. |
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Empires come and go, but the eagle remains a symbol of bravery. |
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That's why it's my favorite animal. |
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Thank you for reading. |
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Till next time. |
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