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likeachild08

May 28, 2025

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My father had said goodbye

Hi everybody I had came back from my born city which is Pasto Colombia in South America. I went there to say goodbye to my dad, who was very sick however I canned talk and share with him a last hug.
It was a emotional moment, event it was sad, I'm happy because I arrived at time to share with him his last days.
Now he had passed away but I always will remember him.
Goodbye my dad.
Thanks for your corrections.


Mi padre ha dicho adios.
Hola a todos I yo he vuelto de mi ciudad natal la cual es Pasto Colombia en Sur America. yo fui alla para despedirme de mi papa, quie estaba muy enfermo sin embargo yo pude hablarle y compartir con el un ultimo abrazo.
Este fue un momento emocional, aunque fue triste, estoy feliz porque llegue a tiempo para compartir con El sus ultimos dias.
ahora, El ha fallecido pero yo siempre lo recordare.
Adios papa.
Gracias por sus correcciones.

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My father hads said goodbye

Hi everybody, I hadve caome back from my born cityhometown which is Pasto, Colombia, in South America.

Always put a comma between the city name and country name.

I went there to say goodbye to my dad, who was very sick h. However, I canneould talk with him and share with him a last hug.

It was a emotional moment, event. Even though it was sad, I'm happy because I arrived atin time to share with him his last days with him.

Now he hads passed away, but I will always will remember him.

Goodbye, my dad.

Thanks for your corrections.

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Sorry for your loss. It's good that you were able to spend some time with your father, though.

My father hads said goodbye

Hi everybody. I had came back from my born cityhometown which is Pasto Colombia in South America.

I went there to say goodbye to my dad, who was very sick however I canneould talk and share with him a last hug with him.

It was a emotional moment, event i. It was sad, but I'm happy because I arrived aton time to share with him his last days with him.

Now he had passed away but I will always will remember him.

Goodbye my dad.

Thanks for your corrections.

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I'm sorry about your loss. It's nice that you were able to spend time with your dad and say goodbye.

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likeachild08

May 28, 2025

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thanks a lot.

My father had said goodbye


My father hads said goodbye

My father hads said goodbye

Hi everybody I had came back from my born city which is Pasto Colombia in South America.


Hi everybody, I hadve caome back from my born cityhometown which is Pasto, Colombia, in South America.

Always put a comma between the city name and country name.

Hi everybody. I had came back from my born cityhometown which is Pasto Colombia in South America.

I went there to say goodbye to my dad, who was very sick however I canned talk and share with him a last hug.


I went there to say goodbye to my dad, who was very sick h. However, I canneould talk with him and share with him a last hug.

I went there to say goodbye to my dad, who was very sick however I canneould talk and share with him a last hug with him.

It was a emotional moment, event it was sad, I'm happy because I arrived at time to share with him his last days.


It was a emotional moment, event i. It was sad, but I'm happy because I arrived aton time to share with him his last days with him.

It was a emotional moment, event. Even though it was sad, I'm happy because I arrived atin time to share with him his last days with him.

Now he had passed away but I always will remember him.


Now he had passed away but I will always will remember him.

Now he hads passed away, but I will always will remember him.

Goodbye my dad.


Goodbye my dad.

Goodbye, my dad.

Thanks for your corrections.


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