My Famvorite Composer

My favorite kind of music is the original sound track of movies.

Alternative and more natural way of expressing it in the US.

Whilen listening to the music, I can remindember the scene of the movie as well as rememberwhat I feelingst at theat moment.

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While listening to the music, I'm reminded of the scene in the movie as well as my feelings when I saw it.

You might listen toay have heard his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on.

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When tuning into a ratio, I listened toheard his songs on every program.

Now he's passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.

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My Famvorite Composer

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My favorite music is the original sound track of movies.

Soundtrack is one word

When listening to the music, I can remindember the scene of the movie as well as remember the feelings I was feeling at the moment.

My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone, who is the greatest composer in the movie world.

You might have listened to his songs if you have watched ET, mThe Mission, Once uUpon a tTime in America and so on.

Words in movie titles are capitalized, except for words like "a", "in", "of", etc.

When I tuninged in to athe ratdio, I listened to his songs on every program.

"in to" is two words here

And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.

Try not to begin sentences with "and". It is not necessary here.

Now he has passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.