May 30, 2022
My Family’s Old House
My family's old house is in the east middle part of my village, which is next to a river. The river encircled the village as a protective barrier of the village.
My family's old house is a row of bungalows that goes east to west and it holds five rooms.
The eastern three rooms connect together as a unit and only have a gate on the south wall of the middle room, which is the living room.
On both sides of the living room there are two bedrooms. Between the living room and the two bedrooms, there are two "walls” which are made of sorghum stems. Of course, there is a small gate in each sorghum stem wall to link the living room and the bedrooms.
The western two rooms connect together as a unit. As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and they unite together. The gate of this unit is on the south wall of the east room.
To the south of the easternmost room, there are two small rooms that go from north to south. That is our kitchen.
The walls of the house are mainly made of adobes. Only on the base of the walls are a few layers of grey bricks.
The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats and wheat straws. The wheat straw is on the surface of the roof.
According to elderly people, although the house is too primitive, it keeps warm in winter and cooler in summer. But in my opinion, they just comfort themselves.
The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters from east to west and 15 meters from north to south.
In the southeast part of the yard, there is a pressed water well. In front of the house in the west unit, there is a jujube tree, which grows so slowly and rarely bears fruit. To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruits every year.
Since the end of the 80s, none in my original family has lived there. All the appearances of my family's old house have changed a lot.
My Family’s Old House
My family's old house is in the east middle of the eastern part of my village, which is next to a river.
The river encircled the village aslike a protective barrier of the village.
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My family's old house is a row of bungalowhas five rooms that goes from east to west and it holds five rooms.
A bungalow is already a house, so I'm not sure what you mean
The easternmost three rooms connect together asform a unit andthat only haves a gate on the southern wall of the middle room, which is the living room.
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Your original sentence sounds like [ bedroom ][ bedroom ][ living room ][ bedroom ][ bedroom ] instead of [ bedroom ][ living room ][ bedroom ]
Between the living room and the two bedrooms, there are two "walls” which are made of sorghum stems.
Of course, there is a small gate in each sorghum stem wall to link the living room and the bedrooms.
The two western twomost rooms connect together asform a unit.
As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and they unite togetherare connected.
The gate of this unit is on the southern wall of the eastern room.
That is our kitchen.
The walls of the house are mainly made of adobe bricks.
Only on the base of the walls are made of a few layers of grey bricks.
The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats and wheat straws.
The wheat straw is placed on the surface of the roof.
According to the elderly people, although the house is too primitive, it keeps you warm in winter and cooler in summer.
But in my opinion, they are just comforting themselves.
The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters from east to west and 15 meters from north to south.
In the southeastern part of the yard, there is a pressed water well.
In front of the house in the western unit, there is a jujube tree, which grows so slowly andit rarely bears fruit.
To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruits every year.
Since the end of the 80s, no one in my original family has lived there.
All tThe appearances of my family's old house haves changed a lot.
May 30, 2022
Thank you very much for correcting my journals.
My family's old house is in the middle of the eastern part of my village, which is next to a river. The river encircles the village like a protective barrier.
My family's old house has five rooms that go from east to west. The easternmost three rooms form a unit that only has a gate on the southern wall of the middle room, which is the living room.
On each side of the living room there is a bedroom. Between the living room and the two bedrooms, there are two "walls” made of sorghum stems.
Of course, there is a small gate in each sorghum stem wall to link the living room and the bedrooms.
The two westernmost rooms form a unit. As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and they are connected. The gate of this unit is on the southern wall of the eastern room.
To the south of the easternmost room, there are two small rooms that go from north to south. That is our kitchen.
The walls of the house are mainly made of adobe bricks. Only the base of the walls are made of a few layers of grey bricks.
The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats and wheat straws. The wheat straw is placed on the surface of the roof.
According to the elderly, although the house is too primitive, it keeps you warm in winter and cool in summer. But in my opinion, they are just comforting themselves.
The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters from east to west and 15 meters from north to south.
In the southeastern part of the yard, there is a pressed water well.
In front of the western unit, there is a jujube tree, which grows so slowly it rarely bears fruit.
To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruits every year.
Since the end of the 80s, no one in my family has lived there. The appearance of my family's old house has changed a lot.
My family's old house is in the east middlemid-eastern part of my village, which is next to a river.
The river encircleds the village and acts as a protective barrier of the village.
My family's old house is a row of bungalows that goes east to west and it holds, with five rooms in total.
The eastern three rooms connect together as a unit andthat only haves a gate on the southern wall of the middle room, which is the living room.
On both sides of the living room there areThere are two bedrooms connected two bedthe living rooms.
As it's written, it seems to say that there are 5 rooms total, but you mentioned 3 rooms earlier so I edited it according to that. Also, "both sides of the living room" is a bit confusing since a standard living room, at least in my understanding, has 4 sides.
BetweenSeparating the living room and the two bedrooms, there are two "walls” which are made of sorghum stems.
The two western two rooms connect together as a unit.
As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and they unite togetherit's like one large room.
Using "unite together" for rooms sounds weird to me. No quite sure if this is what you wanted to say exactly.
The gate of this unit is on the southern wall of the eastern room.
To the sSouth of the easternmost room, there are two small rooms that go from north to southin a straight line.
The walls of the house are mainly made of adobes.
Only onat the base of the walls are there a few layers of grey bricks .
The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats, and wheat straws.
According to the elderly people, although the house is toovery primitive, it keepis warm in the winter and cooler in the summer.
But in my opinion, they're just trying to comfort themselves.
The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters from east to west and 15 meters from north to southby 15 meters.
Unless the orientation of the yard is super important, that's usually omitted.
In the southeastern part of the yard, there is a pressed water well.
In front of the house in the western unit, there is a jujube tree, which grows sovery slowly and rarely bears fruit.
To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruits every year.
Since the end of the 80s, no one in my original family has lived there.
All tThe appearances of my family's old house haves changed a lot.
May 30, 2022
Thank you very much for correcting my journals.
My family's old house
My family's old house is in the mid-eastern part of my village, which is next to a river. The river encircles the village and acts as a protective barrier.
My family's old house is a row of bungalows that goes east to west with five rooms in total.
The eastern three rooms connect together as a unit that only has a gate on the southern wall of the middle room, which is the living room.
There are two bedrooms connected to the living room. Separating the living room and the two bedrooms are “walls” made of sorghum stems. Of course, there is a small gate in each sorghum stem wall to link the living room and the bedrooms.
The two western rooms connect together as a unit. As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and it’s like a large room. The gate of this unit is on the southern wall of the eastern room.
South of the easternmost room, there are two small rooms in a straight line. That is our kitchen.
The walls of the house are mainly made of adobe. Only at the base of the walls are there a few layers of grey bricks.
The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats, and wheat straws. The wheat straw is on the surface of the roof.
According to the elderly, although the house is very primitive, it is warm in the winter and cool in the summer. But in my opinion, they are just comforting themselves.
The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters by 15 meters from north to south.
In the southeastern part of the yard, there is a pressed water well. In front of the western unit, there is a jujube tree, which grows very slowly and rarely bears fruit. To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruit every year.
Since the end of the 80s, no one in my original family has lived there. The appearance of my family's old house has changed a lot.
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My family's old house is in the east middle part of my village, which is next to a river. My family's old house is in the My family's old house is in the |
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The river encircled the village as a protective barrier of the village. The river encircle The river encircled the village Try to avoid repeating village |
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My family's old house is a row of bungalows that goes east to west and it holds five rooms. My family's old house is a row of bungalows that goes east to west My family's old house A bungalow is already a house, so I'm not sure what you mean |
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The eastern three rooms connect together as a unit and only have a gate on the south wall of the middle room, which is the living room. The eastern three rooms connect together as a unit The easternmost three rooms |
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On both sides of the living room there are two bedrooms.
As it's written, it seems to say that there are 5 rooms total, but you mentioned 3 rooms earlier so I edited it according to that. Also, "both sides of the living room" is a bit confusing since a standard living room, at least in my understanding, has 4 sides. On Your original sentence sounds like [ bedroom ][ bedroom ][ living room ][ bedroom ][ bedroom ] instead of [ bedroom ][ living room ][ bedroom ] |
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Between the living room and the two bedrooms, there are two "walls” which are made of sorghum stems.
Between the living room and the two bedrooms, there are two "walls” |
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Of course, there is a small gate in each sorghum stem wall to link the living room and the bedrooms. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The western two rooms connect together as a unit. The two western The two western |
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As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and they unite together. As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and Using "unite together" for rooms sounds weird to me. No quite sure if this is what you wanted to say exactly. As far as I can remember, there is no wall between these two rooms, and they |
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The gate of this unit is on the south wall of the east room. The gate of this unit is on the southern wall of the eastern room. The gate of this unit is on the southern wall of the eastern room. |
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To the south of the easternmost room, there are two small rooms that go from north to south.
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That is our kitchen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The walls of the house are mainly made of adobes. The walls of the house are mainly made of adobe The walls of the house are mainly made of adobe bricks. |
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Only on the base of the walls are a few layers of grey bricks. Only Only |
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The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats and wheat straws. The roof of the house is made up of wooden beams and columns, sorghum stem mats, and wheat straws. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The wheat straw is on the surface of the roof. The wheat straw is placed on the surface of the roof. |
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According to elderly people, although the house is too primitive, it keeps warm in winter and cooler in summer. According to the elderly According to the elderly |
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But in my opinion, they just comfort themselves. But in my opinion, they're just trying to comfort themselves. But in my opinion, they are just comforting themselves. |
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The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters from east to west and 15 meters from north to south. The house has a front yard, which I guess is around 17 meters Unless the orientation of the yard is super important, that's usually omitted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the southeast part of the yard, there is a pressed water well. In the southeastern part of the yard, there is a pressed water well. In the southeastern part of the yard, there is a pressed water well. |
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In front of the house in the west unit, there is a jujube tree, which grows so slowly and rarely bears fruit. In front of the In front of the |
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To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruits every year. To the south of the jujube tree, there is a walnut tree which grows fast and bears fruit This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since the end of the 80s, none in my original family has lived there. Since the end of the 80s, no one in my original family has lived there. Since the end of the 80s, no one in my |
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All the appearances of my family's old house have changed a lot.
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