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I watch interest seriallove learning about the famous naturalist and writer Gerald Durrell, especially his childhood.

He hads loved animals since he was 2 uyears old.

When he was 6-7six or seven years old, his eldest brother, Lorens, left in Greece their familyhis family, which consisted of his mother, his sister, Margo, and his brother, Lessly, in Greece.

I realhighly recommend you to watch - there are funny and luvideos about him. He has an amusing story!.

I watchhave watched an interesting seriales about the childhood of a famous naturalist and writer "Gerald Durell childhood".

Just make sure you are using the correct tense :) In this case, it is implied that you watch the series in the past; therefore, the past tense is required.

Furthermore, serial would not be the correct word. "Series" is what I think you were trying to say.

He had loved animals since he was 2 uyears old.

In English, we do not need to put "had + (verb)" to express the past tense. "He was" is required to express his age.

When he was 6-7 years old, his eldest brother Lorens left infor Greece t. Their family consist ofs his mother, sister, Margo, and brother Lessly.

Good job for expressing his age !

I really recommend you to watch - there areit - It is a funny and luong story!

A pronoun referring to the series is needed.

There is a small grammatical error after. "There are" would not work because there is only one series, "It is" would work.

I watchave been watching with interest a TV serial about the childhood of the famous naturalist and writer, Gerald Durell childhood.

OPTION A: He (had) loved animals since 2 uears oldhe was two years old.¶
OPTION B: He (had) loved animals since age two.

When he was 6-7 six or seven (years old), his eldest brother, Lorens, left in Greece t. Their family then consist ofed his mother, sister Margo, and brother Lessly.

I really recommend you to watch - there arethis funny and luong story!

My Family And AnoOther Animals

unsure what exactly you mean but this is a more grammatically correct sentence

I watched an interesting serial about famous naturalist and writer Gerald Durell's childhood.

He had loved animals since he was 2 uyears old.

When he was 6-7 years old, his eldest brother Lorens left infor Greece t. Their family consist of their mother, a sister Margo and a brother Lesslylee.

I really recommend you to watch it -- therey are funny and luong storyies!

Not entirely sure what you mean with the second bit again but this seemed the clearest

My Family And Another Animals

Not sure what purpose "another" has in this sentence.

Maybe:
"My Family and their Animals"?

The title doesn't match the content of the post.

I watched an interest serial abouting program about the childhood of a famous naturalist and writer, Gerald Durell childhood.

You could also use the word "documentary" in this context instead of "program":
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/documentary

He had loved animals since he was 2 uyears old.

When he was 6- or 7 years old, his eldest brother Lorens left in Greece and their family home consisted of his mother, sister Margo and brother Lessly.

I really recommend you to watch it - there are funny and lung storyies!

I'm not sure what you meant by "lung story"