July 21, 2023
My Family
I was born in a small village in Gongji town, Taihe county of Anhui Province.
My father worked for the local government and my mother was a farmer.
I have three siblings: my two oldest brothers and one youngest sister.
As I started to remember things, my brothers were in school in the town. My mother did farm work every day. My father sometimes helped my mother to do farm work.
Living conditions back then were really poor. We didn't even have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear.
My mother made fabric, clothes and shoes for us by herself. (Villagers planted cotton. People used cotton to make fabric.)
There was no paved road in the countryside. All the roads were dirt roads in the countryside. If it rained, it would be hard to get to somewhere else.
Children in the countryside didn't have any toys. They only played with dirt, branches of trees or something else that was easily found in nature.
Of course, my parents are no longer around. My siblings and I have become old people, but anyway, my siblings and I all went out of the village through our hard work. My two oldest brothers live in Shanghai. My youngest sister lives in Hangzhou, and I live in Fuyang now.
I was born in a small village in Gongji town, Taihe county of Anhui Province.
My father worked for the local government and my mother was a farmer.
I haved three siblings: my two oldestr brothers and one youngestr sister.
My mother did farm work every day.
My father sometimes helped my mother to dowith the farm work.
Living conditions back then were really poor.
We didn't even have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear.
My mother made fabric, clothes and shoes for us by herself.
People used cotton to make fabric.)
There wasere no paved roads in the countryside.
All the roads were dirt roads in the countryside.
If it rained, it would be hard to get to somewhere else.
Children in the countryside didn't have any toys.
They only played with dirt, branches of trees or something else that was easily found in nature.
Of course, my parents are no longer around.
My siblings and I have become old people, but anyway, my siblings and I all wengot out of the village through our hard work.
My two oldestr brothers live in Shanghai.
My youngestr sister lives in Hangzhou, and I live in Fuyang now.
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Such an interesting story about your family.
July 21, 2023
I haved three siblings: my two oldestr brothers and one youngestr sister.
Thank you very much. Could you please tell me the reason for using had to replace have?
July 21, 2023
Thank you very much.
July 21, 2023
Thank you very much. Could you please tell me the reason for using had to replace have?
I used it to match the past tense of the sentences before.
The sentence is not wrong at all by itself. Have is more like talking from the past till now.
You were talking about your past mostly from assuming your childhood part of your life only.
July 21, 2023
Okay, thank you very much!
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My father worked for the local government and my mother was a farmer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have three siblings: my two oldest brothers and one youngest sister. I ha |
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As I started to remember things, my brothers were in school in the town. |
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My mother did farm work every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My father sometimes helped my mother to do farm work. My father sometimes helped my mother |
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Living conditions back then were really poor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We didn't even have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My mother made fabric, clothes and shoes for us by herself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(Villagers planted cotton. |
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People used cotton to make fabric.) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There was no paved road in the countryside. There w |
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All the roads were dirt roads in the countryside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If it rained, it would be hard to get to somewhere else. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Children in the countryside didn't have any toys. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They only played with dirt, branches of trees or something else that was easily found in nature. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, my parents are not around. |
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My siblings and I have become old people, but anyway, my siblings and I all went out of the village through our hard work. My siblings and I have become old people, but anyway, my siblings and I all |
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My two oldest brothers live in Shanghai. My two olde |
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My youngest sister lives in Hangzhou, and I live in Fuyang now. My younge |
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Of course, my parents are no longer around. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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