Nov. 21, 2022
My Family
My Family.
I have three siblings. My two older brothers, and my younger sister.
My big brother is 12 years older than me, my second brother is 5 years older than me and my sister is 3 years younger than me.
My oldest brother used to be an officer in the military. Now he has left the military and lives in Shanghai with his family.
He only has a son, and his son has had a son.
My second older brother works for a local tobacco company. He has only one daughter. His daughter has already gotten married and has a daughter.
My second older brother has two houses. One is in Shanghai and the other is in the local county.
I also have a son and my son has already had his daughter.
My son and I live in Fuyang city, but we don't live together. We live separately in the same community.
My younger sister has only a daughter who is working and living in Hangzhou. My younger sister has two houses. One is in the city l live in, the other is in Hangzhou city.
My parents have already passed away. My father passed away in 1987 and my mom just passed away at the end of last year.
I have three siblings, two older brothers and a younger sister.
My two older brothers, and my younger sister.
He only has aone son, and his son has had a a grandson.
Nov. 21, 2022
Thank you very much.
My Family
I have three siblings.,…
Merge this with the next sentence.
M…my two older brothers, and my younger sister.
My big brother is 12 years older than me, my second brother is 5 years older than me and my sister is 3 years younger than me.
My oldest brother used to be an officer in the military.
Now he has left the military and lives in Shanghai with his family.
He only has a son, and his son has had a son.
My second older brother works for a local tobacco company.
He has only one daughter.
His daughter has already gotten married and has a daughter.
My second older brother has two houses.
One is in Shanghai and the other is in the local county where I live.
“The local county” is unnatural because the reader doesn’t know what “local” means.
I also have a son and my son has already had hisa daughter.
My son and I live in (the city of) Fuyang city, but we don't live together.
“The city of” is only necessary if “Fuyang” would be ambiguous on its own.
We live separately in the same community.
My younger sister has only (only has) a daughter(,) who is working and living in Hangzhou.
My younger sister has two houses.
One is in the city l live in, the other is in Hangzhou city.
My parents have already passed away.
My father passed away in 1987 and my mom just passed away at the end of last year.
Nov. 21, 2022
Thank you very much.
My two older brothers, and my younger sister.
This technically isn’t a complete sentence. I would combine it with the previous sentence with a colon “:”
He only has aone son, and his son has had a son.
He has only one daughter.
I also have a son and my son has already had his daughter.
My younger sister has only ae daughter who is working and living in Hangzhou.
Nov. 21, 2022
Thank you very much.
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I have three siblings. I have three siblings Merge this with the next sentence. I have three siblings, two older brothers and a younger sister. |
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My two older brothers, and my younger sister. My two older brothers, and my younger sister. This technically isn’t a complete sentence. I would combine it with the previous sentence with a colon “:”
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One is in Shanghai and the other is in the local county. One is in Shanghai and the other is in the “The local county” is unnatural because the reader doesn’t know what “local” means. |
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I also have a son and my son has already had his daughter. I also have a son and my son has a I also have a son and my son has already had |
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My son and I live in Fuyang city, but we don't live together. My son and I live in (the city of) Fuyang “The city of” is only necessary if “Fuyang” would be ambiguous on its own. |
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