May 17, 2025
My experience with Arthur Hailey's books
For over a week, I have been reading "Hotel" by Arthur Hailey. I find this book absolutely riveting! I have already read another his work, "Airport", unfortunately in Russian. What I like about his works is that he dives deep into the topic, exploring every nuance in detail and providing corresponding vocabulary. The latter is especially critical for a non-native English speaker. To be completely honest, "Hotel" is my first experience with fiction written in English. As I expected, it is truly a dare. However, I enjoy it! As I mentioned earlier, I find the book engaging, albeit challenging at times. I understand around 85-90%; however I steadily come across unfamiliar words on each page, and sometimes I may lose the flow.
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I have already read another of his works, "Airport", unfortunately in Russian.
What I like about his works is that he dives deep into the topic, exploring every nuance in detail and providing corresponding vocabulary.
As I expected, it is truly a darchallenge.
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Pretty good!
I've been learning Japanese myself and the point about losing the flow is definitely familiar. Like I can go through a paragraph and have an idea of each word but then I get to the end and have to read it again as I don't quite follow what it was trying to say.
May 18, 2025
Thank you for your feedback! Yeah, it requires patience. 😀
I have already read another his work, "Airport", unfortunately in Russian.
I have already read another his work, "Airport", though unfortunately in Russian.
What I like about his works is that he dives deep into the topic, exploring every nuance in detail and providing corresponding vocabulary.
Deeply, an adverb, would be technically be correct. What's written is acceptable in casual writing. The comment about "providing corresponding vocabulary" is a bit weird but I gather it's a language-learning text.
To be completely honest, "Hotel" is my first experience with fiction written in English.
As I expected, it is truly a dare.
This doesn't make sense. It's perhaps a "challenge"? "Dare" usually refers to challenge someone else to do something or, alternatively, to have the courage to do something.
As I mentioned earlier, I find the book engaging, albeit challenging at times.
I understand around 85-90%; however I steadi. Though when I frequently come across unfamiliar words on each page, and sometimes, I may lose the flow.
I understand around 85-90%. Though when I frequently come across unfamiliar words, I may lose the flow.
May 18, 2025
Thanks a lot!
My experience with Arthur Hailey's books
For over a week, I have been reading "Hotel" by Arthur Hailey.
I find this book absolutely riveting!
I have already read another of his works, "Airport", unfortunately in Russian.
What I like about his works is that he dielves deep into the topicsubject matter, exploring every nuance in detail and providing corresponding vocabulary.
The latter is especially critical for a non-native English speaker.
To be completely honest, "Hotel" is my first experience with fiction written in English.
As I expected, it is truly a dara real challenge.
However, I am enjoying it!
As I mentioned earlier, I find the book engaging, albeit challenging at times.
I understand arboundt 85-90%; however, I steadilykeep comeing across unfamiliar words on eachvery page, and sometimes I may lose themy flow.
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Great job! You have fantastic grammar and vocabulary :)
May 18, 2025
Herzlichen Dank!
I find this (to be) book absolutely riveting!
I have already read another one of his works, "Airport", (but) unfortunately in Russian.
As I expected, it is truly like a dare.
"A dare" doesn't quite make sense here, that's why "like a dare" would make more sense.
I understand around 85-90%; however I steadily come across unfamiliar words on each page, and sometimes I may lose the flow.
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Keep it up!
May 17, 2025
Thank you for your feedback!
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