Oct. 5, 2022
A few months ago I made trip to Germany. The flight was too long, I think it was 25 hours plus layover. In the plane a met a really nice girl. She was in my country for her holydays, told me that they (she and her boyfriend) visited the south part of my country. Futhermore she explained me that my country were very similar to her city, I mean the weather en stuff like that because she comes from Wisconsin.
I remember that she thaught me how to recline my seat because that was my first trip on plane so I was totally noob in that. I also remember that I was watching the movie in her seat, maybe she thought tha I was wierd or stupid haha.
My experience in Germany
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I also remember that I was watching the movie in her seat, maybe shelooking at the movie she was watching, she probably thought tha I was wierd or stupid hahaeird.
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My experience in Germany
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She was in my country for her holyidays,. She told me that they (she and her boyfriend) visited the southern part of my country.
Futhermore she explained me that my country wereas very similar to her city,. I mean the weather enand stuff like that because she comes from Wisconsin.
I remember that she thaught me how to recline my seat because thatis was my first tripime on a plane, so I was totally noob in thainexperienced with it.
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I remember that she thaught me how to recline my seat because that was my first trip on a plane so I was totally noob inunfamiliar with that.
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The flight was too long,. I think it was more than a 25 hours plus layover.
In the plane aI met a really nice girl.
She was in my country for her holyidays, and told me that they (she and her boyfriend) visited the south part of my country.
Futhermore, she explained to me that my country wereis very similar to her city, I mean (like the weather en stuff like that) because she comes from Wisconsin.
I remember that she thaught me how to recline my seat because that was my first tripime on a plane, so I was a totally noob in that.
I also remember that I was watching thea movie in her seat, m. Maybe she thought tha I was wieird or stupid haha.
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