Jan. 16, 2021
My experience about Zazen
Recently, I want to practice Zazen or meditation again because my mind was very chaos these days. The Zazen and meditation practice brings up the memories of the Zazen course I took in Japan. The Zazen course was taught in a Japanese temple. The buildings of temple was magnificent but not exaggeration. It locates in a beautiful mountain surrounding by trees and rivers. When I first arrived the temple, I was stunned by the scene of temple, and the environment brings me a sense of peace. Sitted on a plain mat, we practice the Zazen in a room with a dim light and sound of winds, emptying our mind to find the inner peace. Even though the Zazen practice make me feel slumber sometimes, it was a nice experience of feeling the inner peace in such a beautiful place. Although I can't do the Zazen at the temple now, I will try to practice it at my room, focusing on sensation of body and feeling the peace.
My experience aboutwith Zazen
Recently, I have wanted to practice Zazen or meditation again because my mind whas been very chaostic these days.
You can also say "I have been wanting to..."
You need to change your verb tenses because these actions are more continuous.
Consider googling "present perfect continuous tense, present perfect tense".
The Zazen and meditation practice brings up the memories of the Zazen course I took in Japan.
The Zazen course was taught in a Japanese temple.
The buildings of the temple wasere magnificent but not exaggerationtravagant.
It was locatesd in a beautiful mountain surroundinged by trees and rivers.
When I first arrived at the temple, I was stunned by the scene of the temple, and the environment bringsought me a sense of peace.
Siteated on a plain mat, we practice thed Zazen in a room with a dim light and the sound of the winds, emptying our mind to find the inner peace.
Even though the Zazen practice make me feel slumbereepy sometimes, it was a nice experience of feeling the inner peace in such a beautiful place.
You can also say "makes me feel like sleeping..."
Although I can't do the Zazen at the temple now, I will try to practice it atin my room, focusing on the sensation of the body and the feeling theof peace.
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Good work just keep in mind that when you're telling a story about something that happened in the past, you have to use the past tense.
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Recently, I want to practice Zazen or meditation again because my mind was very chaos these days. Recently, I have wanted to practice Zazen or meditation again because my mind You can also say "I have been wanting to..." You need to change your verb tenses because these actions are more continuous. Consider googling "present perfect continuous tense, present perfect tense". |
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The Zazen course was taught in a Japanese temple. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The buildings of temple was magnificent but not exaggeration. The buildings of the temple w |
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It locates in a beautiful mountain surrounding by trees and rivers. It was locate |
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When I first arrived the temple, I was stunned by the scene of temple, and the environment brings me a sense of peace. When I first arrived at the temple, I was stunned by the scene of the temple, and the environment br |
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Sitted on a plain mat, we practice the Zazen in a room with a dim light and sound of winds, emptying our mind to find the inner peace. S |
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Even though the Zazen practice make me feel slumber sometimes, it was a nice experience of feeling the inner peace in such a beautiful place. Even though the Zazen practice make me feel sl You can also say "makes me feel like sleeping..." |
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Although I can't do the Zazen at the temple now, I will try to practice it at my room, focusing on sensation of body and feeling the peace. Although I can't do the Zazen at the temple now, I will try to practice it |
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