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jvillalon

Aug. 4, 2025

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As System Engineer, In my opinion we must to learn new something about tech, database, cloud, AI, programming. It's our responsibility to stay on constant learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily. In my case, I'm focus on integration area; that is an large and fundamental area into enterprises because many processes depends of correct integration of systems, the information handled into those processes contains payments, transactions, personal information; so, our work it's to check and take care each aspect of those integrations, from origin to destiny. We know that we can not put the eyes about everything all time. And that is that all that I have written for the moment.

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As a System Engineer, In my opinion we must to learn new somethings about tech, database, cloud, AI, and programming.

It's our responsibility to stay on constant learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.

It's our responsibility to constantly learn new technologies and innovation with the tools we use daily.

In my case, I'm focus on integration area; that is an large and fundamental area into enterprises because many processes depends ofn correct integration of systems, the information handled into those processes contains payments, transactions, and personal information; so,. So our work it's to check and take care of each aspect of those integrations, from origin to destinyation.

Nice attempt.


However the last part I am not sure I get you clearly ( you said) From origin to destiny. Do you mean from the beginning to the end?

We know that we can not put the eyes about everything all time.

I don't get what you intend to say here.

And that is that all thatall I have written for the moment.

Or you better say
This is all that I have written at the moment

As a Systems Engineer, Iin my opinion we must to learn new something new about tech, database, cloud, AI, and programming every day.

- System in Systems Engineer is plural, just the way it is, not a rule for it
- No capital on words after a comma
- new always comes after something
- when writing a list, the last two items in the list are always separated by 'and' in English
- It sounds incomplete to say 'we must learn something new ...' but not specify when so I added every day as an example

It's our responsibility to stay on constantcontinue learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.

stay on constant learning doesn't make sense. You could change what I put to something like 'responsibility to continue educating ourselves about ...' or 'responsibility to consistently learn about ...' for example

In my case, I'm focusing on integration area; thatwhich is an large and fundamental area into enterpris companies because many processes depends ofn correct integration of systems, and the information handled into those processes which contains payments, transactions, personal information; so etc. In essence, our work it's to check and take care of each aspect of thoese integrations, from origin to destiny.aspects from start to finish.

- You are talking about present so focus should be focusing
- enterprises is not a very common word in English, much more common to use companies or businesses
- The use of ; is not necessary nor is it common. I would avoid using it if I were you
- added 'and' between '... integration of systems' and 'the information ...' because you are listing two items here and the last two items of any list have 'and' in between them in English
- In essence is an example of how you could start a sentence to resume or summarize what you are talking about
- origin and destiny are both not the correct words here. Origin is used to talk about the birth of something as opposed to the start of a process. Destiny is like someones fate not the end of something.

We know that we can not put the eyes aboutt keep an eye on everything all timt once.

I think I know what you're trying to say and I have written the equivalent expression for this in English

And that is that all that I have written for the moment.

The 'that' in this sentence doesn't make sense

As System Engineer, In my opinion we must to learn new something about tech, database, cloud, AI, programming.

You don’t need to add the “to” after “must”. You need to switch the “new” and “something”, so it is “something new”.

It's our responsibility to stay on constant learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.

“With your tools use daily” you need to say who uses them “ so perhaps “with your tools you use daily”.

In my case, I'm focus on integration area; that is an large and fundamental area into enterprises because many processes depends of correct integration of systems, the information handled into those processes contains payments, transactions, personal information; so, our work it's to check and take care each aspect of those integrations, from origin to destiny.

“That is a large” the “an” needs to be a “a”, because there is a consonant after it no a vowel.

We know that we can not put the eyes about everything all time.

Doesn’t really make a whole lot of sense.

And that is that all that I have written for the moment.

You don’t need the second “that”.

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Overall very good! Just some miner mistakes.

My experience


As System Engineer, In my opinion we must to learn new something about tech, database, cloud, AI, programming.


As System Engineer, In my opinion we must to learn new something about tech, database, cloud, AI, programming.

You don’t need to add the “to” after “must”. You need to switch the “new” and “something”, so it is “something new”.

As a Systems Engineer, Iin my opinion we must to learn new something new about tech, database, cloud, AI, and programming every day.

- System in Systems Engineer is plural, just the way it is, not a rule for it - No capital on words after a comma - new always comes after something - when writing a list, the last two items in the list are always separated by 'and' in English - It sounds incomplete to say 'we must learn something new ...' but not specify when so I added every day as an example

As a System Engineer, In my opinion we must to learn new somethings about tech, database, cloud, AI, and programming.

It's our responsibility to stay on constant learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.


It's our responsibility to stay on constant learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.

“With your tools use daily” you need to say who uses them “ so perhaps “with your tools you use daily”.

It's our responsibility to stay on constantcontinue learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.

stay on constant learning doesn't make sense. You could change what I put to something like 'responsibility to continue educating ourselves about ...' or 'responsibility to consistently learn about ...' for example

It's our responsibility to stay on constant learning about innovation and new technologies with your tools that use daily.

It's our responsibility to constantly learn new technologies and innovation with the tools we use daily.

In my case, I'm focus on integration area; that is an large and fundamental area into enterprises because many processes depends of correct integration of systems, the information handled into those processes contains payments, transactions, personal information; so, our work it's to check and take care each aspect of those integrations, from origin to destiny.


In my case, I'm focus on integration area; that is an large and fundamental area into enterprises because many processes depends of correct integration of systems, the information handled into those processes contains payments, transactions, personal information; so, our work it's to check and take care each aspect of those integrations, from origin to destiny.

“That is a large” the “an” needs to be a “a”, because there is a consonant after it no a vowel.

In my case, I'm focusing on integration area; thatwhich is an large and fundamental area into enterpris companies because many processes depends ofn correct integration of systems, and the information handled into those processes which contains payments, transactions, personal information; so etc. In essence, our work it's to check and take care of each aspect of thoese integrations, from origin to destiny.aspects from start to finish.

- You are talking about present so focus should be focusing - enterprises is not a very common word in English, much more common to use companies or businesses - The use of ; is not necessary nor is it common. I would avoid using it if I were you - added 'and' between '... integration of systems' and 'the information ...' because you are listing two items here and the last two items of any list have 'and' in between them in English - In essence is an example of how you could start a sentence to resume or summarize what you are talking about - origin and destiny are both not the correct words here. Origin is used to talk about the birth of something as opposed to the start of a process. Destiny is like someones fate not the end of something.

In my case, I'm focus on integration area; that is an large and fundamental area into enterprises because many processes depends ofn correct integration of systems, the information handled into those processes contains payments, transactions, and personal information; so,. So our work it's to check and take care of each aspect of those integrations, from origin to destinyation.

Nice attempt. However the last part I am not sure I get you clearly ( you said) From origin to destiny. Do you mean from the beginning to the end?

We know that we can not put the eyes about everything all time.


We know that we can not put the eyes about everything all time.

Doesn’t really make a whole lot of sense.

We know that we can not put the eyes aboutt keep an eye on everything all timt once.

I think I know what you're trying to say and I have written the equivalent expression for this in English

We know that we can not put the eyes about everything all time.

I don't get what you intend to say here.

And that is that all that I have written for the moment.


And that is that all that I have written for the moment.

You don’t need the second “that”.

And that is that all that I have written for the moment.

The 'that' in this sentence doesn't make sense

And that is that all thatall I have written for the moment.

Or you better say This is all that I have written at the moment

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