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meanbowler

July 23, 2020

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My exams!

I have two exams to take in August. These days I am preparing for these two exams, and I am sure I will do well.

I guess other languages such as Japanese, Turkish, and now German have affected my English writing skills and who knows maybe my speaking skills as well. Therefore, I would like to write every day on langcorrect, and get my writings checked by native speakers. It is a wonderful platform, and I love it. When I was learning English, there were no such platforms.

English is the first foreign language that I learned as a teenager, and I do not want to forget it.

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My exams!

I have two exams to take in August.

These days, I am preparing for these two exams, and. I am sure I will do well.

I learned in school to try to avoid too many sentences with multiple independent clauses and be concise. Although your use of the comma+and is correct, too many of these are not always preferable.

I guess other languages, such as Japanese, Turkish, and now German have affected my English writing skills, and who knows maybe my speaking skills as well.

I am unsure if the part "who knows" requires a comma afterwards. This sentence is a bit more informal (but totally okay language used in an everyday setting). An alternative (slightly more formal) to this sentence could be;

"Other languages I have learned (or: am learning), such as Japanese, Turkish, and now German may have negatively affected my English writing skills, and maybe even my speaking skills as well."

Therefore, I would like to write every day on langcorrect, and get my writings checked by native speakers.

It is a wonderful platform, and I love it.

When I was learning English, there were no such platforms.

English is the first foreign language that I learned as a teenager, and I do not want to forget it.

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meanbowler

July 24, 2020

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Thanks for the help! have a nice weekend!

English is the first foreign language that I learned as a teenager, and I do not want to forget it.


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My exams!


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I have two exams to take in August.


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These days I am preparing for these two exams, and I am sure I will do well.


These days, I am preparing for these two exams, and. I am sure I will do well.

I learned in school to try to avoid too many sentences with multiple independent clauses and be concise. Although your use of the comma+and is correct, too many of these are not always preferable.

I guess other languages such as Japanese, Turkish, and now German have affected my English writing skills and who knows maybe my speaking skills as well.


I guess other languages, such as Japanese, Turkish, and now German have affected my English writing skills, and who knows maybe my speaking skills as well.

I am unsure if the part "who knows" requires a comma afterwards. This sentence is a bit more informal (but totally okay language used in an everyday setting). An alternative (slightly more formal) to this sentence could be; "Other languages I have learned (or: am learning), such as Japanese, Turkish, and now German may have negatively affected my English writing skills, and maybe even my speaking skills as well."

Therefore, I would like to write every day on langcorrect, and get my writings checked by native speakers.


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It is a wonderful platform because when I was learning English, there were no such platforms.


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It is a wonderful platform, and I love it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was learning English, there were no such platforms.


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