May 16, 2025
1. my name is Isabelly
2. i have 16 years
3. i play volleyboll
4. i love sports
5. i want travel for the in Estados Unidos
6. i love money hahaha
7. i work online
8. i live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul
9. i´m wanted tips for learning English.
1. meu nome e Isabelly
2. eu tenho 16 anos
3. eu jogo vôlei
4. eu amo esportes
5. i quero viajar para os EUA
6. eu amo dinheiro kkk
7. eu trabalho online
8. eu moro no Brasil, Rio Grande Do Sul
9. eu estou querendo dicas para aprender inglês.
1. my name is Isabelly
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2. i haveI am 16 years
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3. iI play volleyboall
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4. iI love sports
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5. iI want to travel forto the in Estados UnidoUnited States
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6. iI love money hahaha
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7. iI work online
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8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul
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9. i´mI wanted tips for learning English.
mMy eEnglish is basic, i go me apresent. I will introduce myself.
I believe this is what you were going for.
1. mMy name is Isabelly
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2. i haveI am 16 years
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3. iI play volleyboall
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4. iI love sports
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5. iI want to travel forto the in Estados Unidos
United States.¶
6. iI love money hahaha
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7. iI work online
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8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul
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9. i´mI wanted tips for learning English.
Sentences begin with capital letters, and typically end with a period '.'
In English, you don't have the age. You are the age. So, 'I am' and not 'I have'.
Also, the state usually comes before the Country.
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Great attempt!
my eEnglish is basic, i go me apresent.
English is capitalized
1. mMy name is Isabelly
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2. i haveI'm 16 years
old.¶
3. iI play volleyboall
.¶
4. iI love sports
.¶
5. iI want travel forto the in Estados Unidos
United States.¶
6. iI love money hahaha
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7. iI work online
.¶
8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul
.¶
9. i´mI wanted tips for learning English.
Periods after each sentence.
You could have said "I'm wanting tips..." but that doesn't sound natural.
Feedback
Keep practicing! You're doing great!
1. mMy name is Isabelly
¶
2. i haveI am 16 years
old ¶
3. iI play volleyboall
¶
4. iI love sports
¶
5. iI want to travel forto the in Estados UnidoUnited States
¶
6. iI love money hahaha
¶
7. iI work online
¶
8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul
¶
9. i´mI wanted tips forto learning English.
Feedback
Muito bom! Escrever todos os dias ajuda muito!
my english is basic, i go me apresent. my English is capitalized
I believe this is what you were going for. |
1. my name is Isabelly 2. i have 16 years 3. i play volleyboll 4. i love sports 5. i want travel for the in Estados Unidos 6. i love money hahaha 7. i work online 8. i live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul 9. i´m wanted tips for learning English. 1. 1. Periods after each sentence. You could have said "I'm wanting tips..." but that doesn't sound natural. 1. Sentences begin with capital letters, and typically end with a period '.' In English, you don't have the age. You are the age. So, 'I am' and not 'I have'. Also, the state usually comes before the Country. 1. my name is Isabelly |
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