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My English Diary

Monday, April 11th 2022
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Today is the first day of my new English diary. My aim is to improve my English a lot - both wirtten and spoken. I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather then essays.

Today I have four appointments, three of them with my colleagues. I have to discuss some important matters concerning our projects with them. I also have to prepare data for invoices.

I feel quite tired today. Maybe it is caused due poor sleep today - my girlfriend had cough at night.
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Tuesday, April 12th 2022
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Today is my second day of my English diary. I try to make a habit of it. This morning I have no meetings so I have time to finish some tasks which require deep focus.

I is quarter past ten and I have not done any of tasks I mentioned above yet :-( I only solve problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite demanding work-day today. Unfortunatelly I did not managed what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog.
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I home it will be warm in the evening so we could sit on a terrace.

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My English Diary

Monday, April 11th 2022

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Today is the first day of my new English diary.

My aim is to improve my English a lot - both wiritten and spoken.

Note: The type of dash you're looking for there is called an "em dash." Although, it's fine to use a hyphen informally

I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather thean essays.

English has like 100 dumb comma rules. I had to look this one up even. Anyway point is that we don't use a comma before rather than

Today I have four appointments, three of them with my colleagues.

Maybe it is becaused due poor sleep today - she didn't sleep well today, but my girlfriend hadwas coughing at night.

Tuesday, April 12th 2022

Today is mythe second day of my English diary.

I'm not sure about this one. Could be correct and I'm just trigger happy

I try to make a habit of it.

This morning I have no meetings so I have time to finish some tasks which require deep focus.

It is quarter past ten and I have not done any of tasks I mentioned above yet :-( I only solve problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite a demanding work-day today. Unfortunatelly, I did not managed to do what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog.
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I hompe it will be warm in the evening so we couldan sit on a terrace.

I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather thean essays.

'rather' is followed by 'than', not 'then' !

Today I have four appointments, three of them with my colleagues. and one with (...)

personally, this is the structure i would use ! nothing was wrong with your phrasing though, good job !

I have to discuss some important matters concernregarding our projects with them.

concerning is good too, but personally i'd say regarding!

Maybe it is caused due poor sleep todaywas because I did not get enough sleep last night - my girlfriend had a cough at night.

the grammer is a little wrong, and this is a simpler way to phrase it!

I tryam trying to make it a habit of it.

'trying' - present tense because i believe you are still trying (right? haha)

It is quarter past ten (or you could just say 10.45pm) and I have not done any of tasks I mentioned above yet :-( I can (? not sure what you were trying to say here 😥) only solve problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite a demanding work-day today. Unfortunatelly I did not managed to do what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog. (workload? not sure what a backlog is)¶
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I home it will be warm in the evening so we could sit on a terrace.

Feedback

wow!! good job! your english is really good 🌟 i hope you rest well after your hectic day, and i hope your girlfriend recovers quickly! good luck for tomorrow 🌈

My English Diary

Monday, April 11th 2022

Today is the first day of my new English diary.

My aim is to improve my English a lot - both wiritten and spoken.

I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather thean essays.

Today I have four appointments, three of them with my colleagues.

I have to discuss some important matters concerning our projects with them.

I also have to prepare data for invoices.

I feel quite tired today.

Maybe it is caused due to poor sleep today - my girlfriend had cough alast night.

Tuesday, April 12th 2022

Today is my second day of my English diary.

I'm trying to make a habit of it.

This morning I have no meetings so I have time to finish some tasks which require deep focus.

It is quarter past ten and I have not done any of the tasks I mentioned above yet. :-( I have only solved problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite a demanding work- day today. Unfortunatelly I did not managed to do what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog.
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I hompe it will be warm in the evening so we couldan sit on athe terrace.

Feedback

Good writing :)
Everything you wrote made sense, so it only needed a few minor edits.

My English Diary


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Monday, April 11th 2022


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is the first day of my new English diary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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My aim is to improve my English a lot - both wirtten and spoken.


My aim is to improve my English a lot - both wiritten and spoken.

My aim is to improve my English a lot - both wiritten and spoken.

Note: The type of dash you're looking for there is called an "em dash." Although, it's fine to use a hyphen informally

I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather then essays.


I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather thean essays.

I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather thean essays.

'rather' is followed by 'than', not 'then' !

I am going to write down some random notes from my day-to-day life, rather thean essays.

English has like 100 dumb comma rules. I had to look this one up even. Anyway point is that we don't use a comma before rather than

Today I have four appointments, three of them with my colleagues.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I have four appointments, three of them with my colleagues. and one with (...)

personally, this is the structure i would use ! nothing was wrong with your phrasing though, good job !

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have to discuss some important matters concerning our projects with them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have to discuss some important matters concernregarding our projects with them.

concerning is good too, but personally i'd say regarding!

I also have to prepare data for invoices.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel quite tired today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe it is caused due poor sleep today - my girlfriend had cough at night.


Maybe it is caused due to poor sleep today - my girlfriend had cough alast night.

Maybe it is caused due poor sleep todaywas because I did not get enough sleep last night - my girlfriend had a cough at night.

the grammer is a little wrong, and this is a simpler way to phrase it!

Maybe it is becaused due poor sleep today - she didn't sleep well today, but my girlfriend hadwas coughing at night.

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Tuesday, April 12th 2022


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Today is my second day of my English diary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is mythe second day of my English diary.

I'm not sure about this one. Could be correct and I'm just trigger happy

I try to make a habit of it.


I'm trying to make a habit of it.

I tryam trying to make it a habit of it.

'trying' - present tense because i believe you are still trying (right? haha)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This morning I have no meetings so I have time to finish some tasks which require deep focus.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I is quarter past ten and I have not done any of tasks I mentioned above yet :-( I only solve problems, one after another. Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails. It was quite demanding work-day today. Unfortunatelly I did not managed what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog. ----- Wednesday, April 13th 2022 ----- The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I home it will be warm in the evening so we could sit on a terrace.


It is quarter past ten and I have not done any of the tasks I mentioned above yet. :-( I have only solved problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite a demanding work- day today. Unfortunatelly I did not managed to do what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog.
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I hompe it will be warm in the evening so we couldan sit on athe terrace.

It is quarter past ten (or you could just say 10.45pm) and I have not done any of tasks I mentioned above yet :-( I can (? not sure what you were trying to say here 😥) only solve problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite a demanding work-day today. Unfortunatelly I did not managed to do what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog. (workload? not sure what a backlog is)¶
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I home it will be warm in the evening so we could sit on a terrace.

It is quarter past ten and I have not done any of tasks I mentioned above yet :-( I only solve problems, one after another.

Now there is a calm moment. I will have a cup of coffee and try to finish some emails.

It was quite a demanding work-day today. Unfortunatelly, I did not managed to do what I wanted to do. I hope tomorrow I will finally manage to reduce my backlog.
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Wednesday, April 13th 2022
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The weather looks nice today. In the evening I am going to a pub with my friends. I hompe it will be warm in the evening so we couldan sit on a terrace.

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