Oct. 29, 2024
An Important Email
One day last week. I opened my Hotmail as usual, while checking some information with separate tabs. Suddenly, an email from BMO bank showed that an e-transfer to my daughter was confirmed by her. I didn't make the transfer, however. Since the receiver is my daughter, so didn't care too much, I was thinking of the transaction probably done by me a few days ago. Later, when I came back home in the evening, the moment I noticed the email saved me. If I couldn't remember the moment, my family would lose a lot of money.
My Emails Disappeared
One day last week.,
I opened my Hotmail as usual, while checking some information with separate tabs.
Suddenly, an email from BMO bank showed that an e-transfer to my daughter was confirmed by her.
I didn't make the transfer, however.
Since the receiver is my daughter, soI didn't care too much, I was thinking ofand I thought the transaction was probably done by me a few days ago.
Later, when I came back home in the evening, the mom was whent I noticrealized the email saved me.
I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say here. Feels like a bit of a jump, how did the email save you?
If I couldn't remember the moment, my family would've loset a lot of money.
Which moment? If you couldn't remember the time you sent your daughter money? Or if you didn't notice the email in your inbox?
Oct. 30, 2024
Thank you! The moment that I noticed the Email, in fact, the email was deleted by some strangers immediately.
Oct. 31, 2024
I see that there was a prequel, makes sense now!
My Emails Disappeared
Stylistically you don’t usually capitalise every word in the title.
One day last week.
I opened my Hotmail as usual, while checking some information with separateon other tabs.
Suddenly, an email from BMO bank showed that an e-transfer to my daughter was confirmed by her.
However, I didn't make the transfer, however.
Since the receiver is my daughter, soI didn't care too much, as I was thinking ofthat the transaction was probably done by me a few days ago.
Later, when I came back home in the evening, I realised that the moment I noticed the email would saved me.
If I couldn't remember the moment, my family would lose a lot of money.
Oct. 30, 2024
Thank you!
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If I couldn't remember the moment, my family would lose a lot of money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! If I couldn't remember the moment, my family would've los Which moment? If you couldn't remember the time you sent your daughter money? Or if you didn't notice the email in your inbox? |
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