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Jack

May 28, 2022

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My Elementary School

My elementary school was right in the back of my village, and between them, there was only a small river.

The village was southward of the school, and it covered a square-shaped area.

Because that river was around the village and we only had an entrance in the center of the village's south side, so we needed to go southward through the entrance first, and then went by the river northward to the school.

This school was for children who were from four villages (including my village). The other three villages were located in the east, north and west locations respectively. They were very close to my village, just a few hundreds of meters away.

The school only had a row of bungalows, which was for about four classes and went from east to west. In the southeast part of the school, there was another class.

There were only five grades in the school and every grade only had one class of about 40 students.

I finished my elementary school studies there and it existed even after I left my village for many years.

But now, it doesn't exist anymore. I don't even know when the school disappeared. It's said that the reason was because of the decline of the population in the countryside.

I often think about it. Although the education conditions were really bad, I was young and happy.

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My Elementary School

Normally you would not capitalise elements school.

My elementary school was right inat the back of my village, and between them village and the school, there was only a small river.

The village was to the southward of the school, and it covered a square-shaped area.

Because that river was arounencircled the village and we only had anone entrance in the center of the village's south side, so we needed to go southwardwe has to go through the main entrance first, and then went by the river towards the northward to the school.

This school was for children who were from four villages (including my village).

The other three villages were located in the east, north and west locations respectively.

They were very close to my village, just a few hundreds of meters away.

The school only hadwas made up of a row of bungalows, which was for about four classent from east to west and went from east to west.held about four classes.

In the southeast part of the school, there was another class.

There were only five grades in the school and every grade only had one class of about 40 students.

I finished my elementary school studies there and it existed for many years, even after I left my village for many years.

But now, it doesn't exist anymore.

I don't even know when the school disappceased to exist. ( cearsed. operations)

It's said that the reason was because of the decline of the population in the countryside.

I often think about it.

Although the education conditions were really bad, I was young and happy.

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Jack

May 28, 2022

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Thank you very much for correcting my journals.

My elementary school was right at the back of my village, and between the village and the school, there was only a small river.

The village was to the south of the school, and it covered a square-shaped area.

Because that river encircled the village and we only had one entrance in the center of the village's south side, we had to go through the main entrance first, and then went by the river towards the north to the school.

This school was for children who were from four villages (including my village). The other three villages were located in the east, north and west respectively.

They were very close to my village, just a few hundreds of meters away.

The school was made up of a row of bungalows, which went from east to west and held about four classes. In the southeast part of the school, there was another class.

There were only five grades in the school and every grade only had one class of about 40 students.

I finished my elementary school studies there and it existed for many years, even after I left my village.

But now, it doesn't exist anymore. I don't even know when the school ceased to exist (ceased operations). It's said that the reason was because of the decline of the population in the countryside.

I often think about it. Although the education conditions were really bad, I was young and happy.

My Elementary School


My Elementary School

Normally you would not capitalise elements school.

My elementary school was right in the back of my village, and between them, there was only a small river.


My elementary school was right inat the back of my village, and between them village and the school, there was only a small river.

The village was southward of the school, and it covered a square-shaped area.


The village was to the southward of the school, and it covered a square-shaped area.

Because that river was around the village and we only had an entrance in the center of the village's south side, so we needed to go southward through the entrance first, and then went by the river northward to the school.


Because that river was arounencircled the village and we only had anone entrance in the center of the village's south side, so we needed to go southwardwe has to go through the main entrance first, and then went by the river towards the northward to the school.

This school was for children who were from four villages (including my village).


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The other three villages were located in the east, north and west locations respectively.


The other three villages were located in the east, north and west locations respectively.

They were very close to my village, just a few hundreds of meters away.


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The school only had a row of bungalows, which was for about four classes and went from east to west.


The school only hadwas made up of a row of bungalows, which was for about four classent from east to west and went from east to west.held about four classes.

In the southeast part of the school, there was another class.


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There were only five grades in the school and every grade only had one class of about 40 students.


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I finished my elementary school studies there and it existed even after I left my village for many years.


I finished my elementary school studies there and it existed for many years, even after I left my village for many years.

But now, it doesn't exist anymore.


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I don't even know when the school disappeared.


I don't even know when the school disappceased to exist. ( cearsed. operations)

It's said that the reason was because of the decline of the population in the countryside.


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I often think about it.


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Although the education conditions were really bad, I was young and happy.


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